Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)網(wǎng)友Peter參加中國(guó)象棋網(wǎng)絡(luò)挑戰(zhàn)賽獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一封英文電子郵件向他表示祝賀。

1) 祝賀他獲獎(jiǎng)；

2) 肯定他付出的努力；

3) 詢問(wèn)何時(shí)方便，在網(wǎng)上切磋棋藝。

注意：1)詞數(shù)100左右；

2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3)開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好。

參考詞匯：the Chinese Chess Network Challenge

Dear Peter,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations

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Congratulations again.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Peter,

I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge. As your friend, I just want you to know how glad I am at your success.

“Everything comes to him who waits.” For these years, you’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess and kept on practicing it every day. Not only have you read many books about Chinese chess strategy, but also you have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests. Finally, you succeeded in winning the online competition!

So I’m so happy that you become champion of this network challenge. At last, I hope to play Chinese chess with you so that we can make progress together. Please tell me when you have time.

Congratulations again.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫(xiě)一封祝賀信。

第一步：

審題：祝賀信 祝賀Peter參加中國(guó)象棋網(wǎng)絡(luò)挑戰(zhàn)賽獲得了一等獎(jiǎng)

人稱：第一、二人稱

時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法，分三部分，第一部分祝賀Peter獲獎(jiǎng)，第二部分肯定Peter付出的努力，

第三部分想與他在網(wǎng)上切磋棋藝，詢問(wèn)何時(shí)方便，并再次表示祝賀。

要點(diǎn)：

1. 祝賀Peter獲得中國(guó)象棋網(wǎng)絡(luò)挑戰(zhàn)賽一等獎(jiǎng)

2．肯定Peter付出的努力

①每天堅(jiān)持練習(xí)

②閱讀有關(guān)象棋策略的書(shū)籍

③參加各種中國(guó)象棋比賽；

3．想與他在網(wǎng)上切磋棋藝，詢問(wèn)何時(shí)方便

4.再次表示祝賀

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞匯、短語(yǔ)）

congratulations to sb. on …；win the first prize；be glad at；show interest in；keep on doing…；chess strategy；compete in；contest；succeed in；win the competition； champion；play Chinese chess；make progress

第三步：連詞成句

(1)I am writing to offer my sincere congratulations to you on your winning the first prize in the Chinese Chess Network Challenge.

(2) You’ve shown great interest in Chinese chess.

(3) You keep on practicing it every day.

(4) You have read many books about Chinese chess strategy.

(5) You have competed in all kinds of Chinese chess contests.

(6) You succeeded in winning the online competition!

(7) You become champion of this network challenge.

(8) I hope to play Chinese chess with you.

(9)We can make progress together.

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進(jìn)行遣詞造句,適當(dāng)?shù)剡\(yùn)用句型，注意時(shí)態(tài)和主謂一致問(wèn)題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞)

表示時(shí)間順序： first of all; to begin/start with , in the beginning

firstly.... secondly .... lastly / finally/in the end

表示并列或補(bǔ)充關(guān)系： what is more; besides, moreover, apart from;

in addition, as well as；not only…but(also), meanwhile, in the meantime, some...some…others

表示轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：but, however, although, though, yet, while

on one hand…on the other hand ...,

表示因果關(guān)系：because, as, therefore, as a result, as a consequence , consequently, thus

連句成文，運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，使句與句之間邏輯性更強(qiáng)、

段與段之間結(jié)構(gòu)清晰。