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8．假設(shè)你是李杰，與你同年級讀書的堂弟李威正在為寫不好英語書面表達(dá)而感到苦惱．現(xiàn)在請你寫一封信予以安慰和鼓勵，并給他提一些提高英語寫作能力的建議．建議應(yīng)包括如下要點(diǎn)：
1．加強(qiáng)閱讀，注意詞匯積累．
2．多練習(xí)寫作，如堅持寫日記．
3．朗讀、背誦美文佳句．
注意：可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容使文章更加充實(shí)、連貫，但最佳詞數(shù)應(yīng)控制在80-120之間，文章的開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Li Wei，
I'm sorry for your being upset as you don't think you can write English well．Don't be worried about it too much．Here are some suggestions for you，which，I think，will help you．
First you should do more reading and enlarge your vocabulary．Meanwhile you'd practise writing regularly，for example，keeping a diary every day．In addition，reading aloud and trying to memorizing excellent passages and expressions are also necessary．By the way，why not ask your teacher for help？She or he will find mistakes in your writings and give you advice on how to write better．
All in all，don't be disappointed．So long as you keep trying，you are sure to improve your writing ability．
Sincerely yours，
Li Jie．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封關(guān)于提高英語寫作能力建議的書信．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一表明書信目的；二提高英語寫作能力的建議； 三予以安慰和鼓勵．
高分句型：
1．Here are  some suggestions for you，which，I think，will help you．句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，代指先行詞some suggestions，做從句的主語；I think是插入語．
2．In addition，reading aloud and trying to memorizing excellent passages and expressions are also necessary．句子里In addition表示"此外"；reading aloud 和 trying to memorizing excellent passages and expressions 并列，做主語．

解答 Dear Li Wei，
     I'm sorry for your being upset as you don't think you can write English well．Don't be worried about it too much．Here are  some suggestions for you，which，I think，will help you．【高分句型一】（表明書信目的）
    First you should do more reading and enlarge your vocabulary．Meanwhile you'd practise writing regularly，for example，keeping a diary every day．In addition，reading aloud and trying to memorizing excellent passages and expressions are also necessary．【高分句型二】By the way，why not ask your teacher for help？She or he will find mistakes in your writings and give you advice on how to write better．（提高英語寫作能力的建議）
     All in all，don't be disappointed．So long as you keep trying，you are sure to improve your writing ability．（予以安慰和鼓勵）
Sincerely yours，
Li Jie

點(diǎn)評 考查提綱類作文．
提綱類寫作是近年高考英語書面表達(dá)的熱點(diǎn)題型，命題人 通常以提綱作文的形式考查書信、報道、通知、日記、發(fā)言稿、對某人或某物的介紹、歡迎詞等．提綱作文的選材范圍很廣，內(nèi)容簡單易懂，且多是考生熟悉的話題．這類題型的主要特點(diǎn) 是要點(diǎn)明確，范圍具體．但考生也容易受中文提綱的制約，將 書面表達(dá)變成了翻譯，造成語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯上的單調(diào)，甚至寫 出結(jié)構(gòu)不完整的句子．