Question

13．假如你是李華，你校學(xué)生會(huì)于2014年5月7日下午舉行了"校園書(shū)市（a campus book fair）"活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)你寫(xiě)封email給你的美國(guó)筆友Peter，告訴他此次活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況．內(nèi)容包括：
1．活動(dòng)目的：①給同學(xué)們提供一個(gè)交換圖書(shū)的機(jī)會(huì)
②更好地利用讀過(guò)的書(shū)
2．具體內(nèi)容：①把你不想保留的書(shū)拿到書(shū)市上出售
②購(gòu)買你喜歡的書(shū)
③交換圖書(shū)
3．談?wù)勀愕母邢牒腕w會(huì)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．請(qǐng)勿提及真實(shí)學(xué)校姓名：
3． 可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫；
4．開(kāi)頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本文為提綱類的書(shū)信作文，要求給你的美國(guó)筆友Peter，告訴他"校園書(shū)市（a campus book fair）"活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況．要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出．難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述．審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，人稱主要用第一人稱．
重要短語(yǔ)：
provide sb with an opportunity to do sth給某人一個(gè)做某事的機(jī)會(huì)；make better use of更好地利用；not only…but also…不但…而且…；As far as I'm concerned就我個(gè)人而言；be beneficial to sb對(duì)某人有利；On the one hand，…On the other hand，…一方面…另一方面…；
高分句型：
1．I like this activity，which is beneficial to us students．這里用了which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句．
2．I not only got rid of several books but also bought a few books I really wanted．使用了not only…but also連接的兩個(gè)并列的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)．
3．I wish more events like this book fair would be held in our school．本句中wish后面的賓語(yǔ)從句中運(yùn)用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣的用法．

解答 Hello Peter!How are you going these days？
In order to provide us students with an opportunity to exchange books and make better use of our used books，our Students'Union held a campus book fair on the afternoon of June 15，2013．（說(shuō)明活動(dòng)目的及時(shí)間）
At the book fair，students could sell unwanted books，buy books they needed or simply trade books with each other．Like other fairs of this kind，prices were typically very low．Happily，I not only got rid of several books but also bought a few books I really wanted．（高分句型）（活動(dòng)內(nèi)容）
As far as I'm concerned，I like this activity，which is beneficial to us students．（高分句型）On the one hand，I felt my social skills had been well practiced and improved．On the other hand，this activity also gave us an excellent opportunity to feel a bit of the real world．I wish more events like this book fair would be held in our school．（高分句型）（個(gè)人感想）
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Love，
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略．同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采．