Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)。假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改僅限一詞。2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
Dear Cathy,
I am writing to share my opinion on fashion with you, for I had just heard that you are disappointing because you can't afford famous brands.
I shall say that it is naturally for people to care about his appearance. And it is true that fashionable thing like clothes and shoes will make one more eye-catching. Therefore, I think it is really a waste of money for you to buy famous brands. Besides, it will also add the burden of your parents.
What's more, beauty is only skin-deep. There are many things in which can make you popular beside fashion. A great amount of knowledge and a warm heart will surely win others' respect.
As the saying goes, never judge the person by his appearance. I do hope that you will remember the saying and be as happy as you used to be.
Yours,
Jane

Answer 1

【答案】①had—have②disappointing—disappointed③naturally—natural④his —their⑤thing —things⑥Therefore —However⑦在add和the之間加to⑧去掉in⑨beside —besides⑩the—a

【解析】

（1）had—have 句意：我剛剛聽說你因?yàn)樨?fù)擔(dān)不起名牌而感到失望�？芍�用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)，故把had—have。

（2）disappointing—disappointed 句意：我剛剛聽說你因?yàn)樨?fù)擔(dān)不起名牌而感到失望。故把disappointing—disappointed。

（3）naturally—natural 形容詞放在be動(dòng)詞后面做表語，故把naturally—natural。

（4）his —their 句意：人們?cè)谝馑麄兊耐獗硎呛茏匀坏�。故把his —their。

（5）thing —things 句意：時(shí)尚的東西。thing是可數(shù)名詞，故把thing —things。

（6）Therefore —However 句意：然而，這真的是浪費(fèi)錢。此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折，故把Therefore —However。

（7）在add和the之間加to 句意：它也將增加你父母的負(fù)擔(dān)。add to添加，增加。故在add和the之間加to.

（8）去掉in 此處考查定語從句，many things是先行詞，從句既缺主語，又缺引導(dǎo)詞，可知引導(dǎo)詞在這里做主語，故去掉in。

（9）beside—besides 句意：除了時(shí)尚外還使你受歡迎。故把beside —besides。

（10）the—a 句意：不要靠外表判斷一個(gè)人。故把the—a。