Question

9．假設(shè)今年暑假，你準(zhǔn)備去某地做一次故地重游的旅行，并準(zhǔn)備帶上你的朋友們一起去．請(qǐng)寫一篇文章介紹你的旅行計(jì)劃，主要包括以下內(nèi)容：
•準(zhǔn)備去什么地方
•故地重游的原因
•本次計(jì)劃如何開(kāi)展
•希望做些什么準(zhǔn)備
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Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一文章，介紹一次和朋友一起故地重游的旅行計(jì)劃．寫作要點(diǎn)包括：1．準(zhǔn)備去什么地方； 2．故地重游的原因；3．本次計(jì)劃如何開(kāi)展；4．希望做些什么準(zhǔn)備．
寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．
重要短語(yǔ)：take advantage of（利用），a large-scale （大規(guī)模的，大量的），apply to do sth （申請(qǐng)做某事），a good chance to do sth （做某事的機(jī)會(huì)），make sure （確保），be under control （在控制，掌握之中），in advance（提前），be of great importance（有重要性），make sb exhausted （使某人精疲力竭），prevent oneself from doing（阻止某人做某事）．
【高分句型】

1．I'm going to take advantage of my summer holiday to revisit Beijing with my friends，for the reason ①that a large-scale amusement park will be opened in July and we have applied to be volunteers for 15 days，②which is a good chance to play as well as work．
①這里是由that引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句，that引導(dǎo)的從句‘a(chǎn) large-scale amusement park will be opened in July and we have applied to be volunteers for 15 days'解釋說(shuō)明reason的具體內(nèi)容．
②這里是由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為‘I'm going to take advantage of my summer holiday to revisit Beijing with my friends'，定語(yǔ)從句中which作主語(yǔ)，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．

2．With so much preparatory work to do，we need to plan our traveling ahead to make sure everything is under control．

這里是with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)在句中作原因狀語(yǔ)，結(jié)構(gòu)為"with+賓語(yǔ)+不定式"．主句中"we need to plan our traveling ahead to make sure everything is under control"的不定式短語(yǔ)"to make sure everything is under control"作目的狀語(yǔ)．

解答 I'm going totake advantage of my summer holiday to revisit Beijing with my friends，（準(zhǔn)備去什么地方）for the reason that alarge-scale amusement park will be opened in July and we have applied to bevolunteers for 15 days，which is a good chance to play as well as work．【高分句型】（故地重游的原因）
With so muchpreparatory work to do，we need to plan our traveling ahead to make sureeverything is under control．【高分句型】Firstand foremost，we need to decide if we go there and back by train or plane，thenbook the ticket in advance．Secondly，the confirmation of our accommodation isof great importance，since a far distance may make us exhausted during the workdays．What's more，the outdoor activities must be a considerable challenge forus，so sun protection is the first priority such as sunhat，sun scream andcooling oil．Each one should prevent ourselves from heat stroke．（本次計(jì)劃如何開(kāi)展）
At last，there's still a lot of work to do before setting off．But what matters most isto take your good mood and camera to record your traveling bit by bit fromheart．【高分句型】（希望做些什么準(zhǔn)備）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．