Question

11．假定你是李華，你校外籍教師Mr．Smith給你發(fā)電子郵件，請你下周末帶領(lǐng)他進行一次近郊游．請你用英語給他回封電子郵件，要點如下：
1．樂意接受他的請求；
2．你計劃帶他去游覽東郊廣靈湖；
3．出游時間和所需準備等相關(guān)信息．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．為使行文連貫，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)．
 3．開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Mr．Smith，
It's my pleasure to be asked to act as your guide to take a short trip on next weekend．（高分句型一）And now I am writing to tell you the details as follows．
I'll plan a wonderful and well-organized trip for you to the Guangling Lake，in the eastern suburb，not far from the downtown．（高分句型二）You will be amazed at the scenery there．In terms of the meeting time，8 o'clock on the morning of Saturday will be fine．I will be waiting for you at the school gate then．Remember not to take too many things．Just a bottle of water，some kinds of food，a cap and a pair of sunglasses will be enough．I believe you will enjoy the trip and we'll have a good day together．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to seeing you．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，你校外籍教師Mr．Smith給你發(fā)電子郵件，請你下周末帶領(lǐng)他進行一次近郊游．請你用英語給他回封電子郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：樂意接受他的請求；你計劃帶他去游覽東郊廣靈湖；出游時間和所需準備等相關(guān)信息   2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：take a short trip短途旅行； far from 遠離；be amazed at對…吃驚；In terms of 關(guān)于；have a good day過得愉快；
It's my pleasure to be asked to act as your guide to take a short trip on next weekend．（高分句型一）
I'll plan a wonderful and well-organized trip for you to the Guangling Lake，in the eastern suburb，not far from the downtown．（高分句型二）
I believe you will enjoy the trip and we'll have a good day together．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
      It's my pleasure to be asked to act as your guide to take a short trip on next weekend．（高分句型一）And now I am writing to tell you the details as follows．
      I'll plan a wonderful and well-organized trip for you to the Guangling Lake，in the eastern suburb，not far from the downtown．（高分句型二）You will be amazed at the scenery there．In terms of the meeting time，8 o'clock on the morning of Saturday will be fine．I will be waiting for you at the school gate then．Remember not to take too many things．Just a bottle of water，some kinds of food，a cap and a pair of sunglasses will be enough．I believe you will enjoy the trip and we'll have a good day together．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to seeing you．
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．