【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(＾)，并在此符號(hào)下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Yesterday my mother let me to help her make chocolate cookies. First we measure ingredients(配料). As soon as the butter was soft, we put them into a large bowl and mixed it with sugar. Next, she asked me to add eggs into the butter or sugar. Then it was time to adding flour. You must be careful that you don't add too many flour at one time or you'll cover everything in a white dust. Final, we added chocolate and some nuts. The mixture put on a cookie sheet with a spoon and twenty minute later, our delicious creations were ready. After taste some, I found that cookies taste the best when they are still warm.

【答案】to去掉

measure →measured

them →it

or →and

adding →add

many →much

Final →Finally

mixture 后面添加was

minute →minutes

taste →tasty

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。記敘了作者和媽媽昨天做巧克力餅干的經(jīng)過。

1.考查固定短語。句意：昨天我媽媽讓我?guī)退銮煽肆︼灨�。固定短語let sb. do sth.“讓某人做某事”后跟動(dòng)詞原形，故to去掉。

2.考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。句意：首先我們測(cè)量成分。根據(jù)上文可知事情發(fā)生在昨天應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)，故measure改為measured。

3.考查代詞。句意：黃油一軟，我們就把它放進(jìn)一個(gè)大碗里，和糖混合。此處指代上文the butter應(yīng)用it。故them改為it。

4.考查連詞。句意：接下來，她讓我往黃油和糖里加雞蛋。結(jié)合上文可知黃油和糖被同時(shí)放入了一個(gè)碗里，因此此處應(yīng)該是并列關(guān)系，故or改為and。

5.考查固定句式。句意：然后該加面粉了。固定句式it is/was time to do sth.“是時(shí)候做某事”，故adding改為add。

6.考查形容詞。句意：你必須小心，不要一次加太多的面粉，否則會(huì)把所有的東西都蒙上一層白色的灰塵。修飾不可數(shù)名詞flour應(yīng)用much。故many改為much。

7.考查副詞。句意：最后，我們加入了巧克力和一些堅(jiān)果。修飾整個(gè)句子需要副詞，故Final改為Finally。

8.考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)語態(tài)。句意：將混合物用勺子放在小甜餅上，二十分鐘后，我們的美味產(chǎn)品就準(zhǔn)備好了。本句主語mixture與謂語動(dòng)詞構(gòu)成被動(dòng)關(guān)系，且事情發(fā)生在過去故用一般過去時(shí)。故mixture后添加was。

9.考查名詞的數(shù)。句意同上。minute為可數(shù)名詞，由twenty修飾可知應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式。故minute改為minutes。

10.考查形容詞。句意：嘗了一些之后，我發(fā)現(xiàn)當(dāng)餅干還是熱的時(shí)候味道最好。固定短語find sth.+adj表示“發(fā)現(xiàn)某事怎么樣”，應(yīng)用形容詞作賓語補(bǔ)足語，故taste改為tasty。

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