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【題目】假定你是李華，你們班打算下周二舉行班級音樂會，請你代表班級邀請你校外教 David 參加。內(nèi)容包括：

1.時間：下周二下午2:00。

2.地點：校禮堂。

3.節(jié)目：各種樂器演奏,粵語歌曲,京劇等。

4.希望David老師也能表演一個節(jié)目，樂器或歌曲。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當加入細節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；

3.稱呼和落款已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)；

4.禮堂 auditorium；粵語歌曲 Cantopop songs.

Dear David,

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Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

On behalf of my class, I'm writing to invite you to our class concert, which will take place at 2:00 pm next Tuesday in our school’s auditorium.

During the concert, my classmates will perform various musical instruments such as the erhu, the guzheng as well as the violin. In addition, some of them will sing Cantopop songs, popular songs and Beijing Opera. As is well known, Beijing Opera is the most important part of Chinese culture, and the world intangible heritage. We’re sure this is going to be an interesting intercultural experience for you.

At the end of the concert you’re welcome to give us a performance if you wish. Playing a musical instrument or singing a song would be OK.

If you won’t be able to attend, please inform us in advance.

We’re really looking forward to seeing you.

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：

本文書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇是一篇電子郵件：假定你是李華，你們班打算下周二舉行班級音樂會，請你代表班級邀請你校外教 David 參加。內(nèi)容包括：1.時間：下周二下午2:00。2.地點：校禮堂。3.節(jié)目：各種樂器演奏,粵語歌曲,京劇等。4.希望David老師也能表演一個節(jié)目，樂器或歌曲。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關鍵詞，如： auditorium（禮堂）； Cantopop songs.（

粵語歌曲）；perform various musical instruments（表演各種各樣的樂器）；Beijing Opera（京�。�；As is well known,（眾所周知）；an interesting intercultural experience（一次有趣的不同文化間的經(jīng)歷）；in advance（提前）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)語態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，魚片連貫，詞數(shù)適當。另外全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。

【亮點說明】

本文是一篇電子郵件，格式正確，內(nèi)容符合要求，文中使用高級詞匯和句子。I'm writing to invite you to our class concert, which will take place at 2:00 pm next Tuesday in our school’s auditorium.句中which引導非限制性定語從句；As is well known, Beijing Opera is the most important part of Chinese culture, and the world intangible heritage.句中as引導非限制性定語從句；Playing a musical instrument or singing a song would be OK.動名詞做主語；If you won’t be able to attend, please inform us in advance.條件句使用巧妙；另外，On behalf of代表，In addition另外，At the end of在---盡頭，等的運用為文章增色添彩。