Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你校下個(gè)月舉行放風(fēng)箏比賽（The Kite Flying Competition），請(qǐng)你寫封電子郵件給你的英國(guó)交換生朋友Mark，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 比賽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；

2. 比賽要求和意義；

3. 希望他一同參賽。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mark,

How are you going? I’m writing to tell you that the Kite Flying Competition is scheduled on the first day next month on the playground of our school. It provides us with a great chance to see different shapes of kites.

The competition is required to use DIY kites. In addition, the performance will be judged and ranked by kites’ unique design as well as flying techniques. Moreover, this competition will help us experience and have a better comprehension of the traditional Chinese folk entertainment activities.

I’d like to take part in the competition. I know you’re creative, so I do hope you can team up with me. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封信件；假定你是李華，你校下個(gè)月舉行放風(fēng)箏比賽（The Kite Flying Competition），請(qǐng)你寫封電子郵件給你的英國(guó)交換生朋友Mark，內(nèi)容包括：1. 比賽時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)；2. 比賽要求和意義；3. 希望他一同參賽。人稱以第三人稱為主。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)、一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：be scheduled on (定于)，next month (下個(gè)月)，on the playground of our school (在我們學(xué)校操場(chǎng)上)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。