Question

8．此題要求改正所給短文中錯誤．對標(biāo)有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個"√"；如有錯誤（每行只有一個錯誤），則按下列情況改正：
    該行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉．
    該行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（^），在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞．
    該行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線．在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞．
    注意：原行沒有錯的不要改．
    In my hometown there used to have a temple with a history           66．have→be
of over eight hundred years．It lies in a valley with green hills         67．lies→lay
around it．It was such beautiful and famous that many                      68．such→so
tourists came to visit to it every day．They took                                69．去掉第二個to
photo； they wrote down their names on the walls；                         70．photo→photos
they brought foods，drinks and left rubbish everywhere．                 71．√
One day some tourists burnt a fire to cook food near the temple．      72．burnt→made/lit
All of a sudden，strong wind blew．The wooden temple                     73．strong 前加a
was caught fire．Soon the whole temple was burned out                     74．去掉第一個was
but only a few walls remained．The beautiful temple disappeared．    75．but→and．

Answer 1

分析 文章大意：在我的故鄉(xiāng)，過去有一座寺廟．這座寺廟有著八百多年的歷史．過去每天有游客來參觀．他們拍照，在墻上寫名詞，買食物等等．有一天，有些游客生火燒食物，突然一陣風(fēng)吹來，整個木寺廟著火了，很快寺廟燒掉了，只剩幾座墻．這個美麗的寺廟消失了．

解答 In my hometown there used to have a temple with a history  
                                              be
of over eight hundred years．It lies in a valley with green hills 
                                               lay
around it．It was  suchbeautiful and famous that many 
                            so
tourists came to visit to it every day．They took         
                                 去掉
photo； they wrote down their names on the walls；    
photos       
they brought foods，drinks and left rubbish everywhere． 
      
One day some tourists burnta fire to cook food near the temple． 
                                made/lit
All of a sudden，∧strong wind blew．The wooden temple    
                         a
was caught fire．Soon the whole temple was burned out          
 去掉  
butonly a few walls remained．The beautiful temple disappeared．  
and

66．have→be   考查there be 句型．     
67．lies→lay    考查時態(tài)．
68．such→so      考查副詞搭配．
69．去掉第二個to．考查介詞搭配．
70．photo→photos  考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．photo是可數(shù)名詞，拍照一般用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
71．√
72．burnt→made/lit  考查動詞短語搭配．light/make a fire生火的意思．
73．strong 前加a 考查冠詞．wind前面有形容詞修飾，所以需要用不定冠詞．
74．去掉第一個was       考查語態(tài)．catch fire不可于被動語態(tài)，所以去掉was．
75．but→and 考查連詞． 前后之間是順承關(guān)系，所以用and．

點(diǎn)評 改錯題要注意代詞，連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉(zhuǎn)化．
做好短文改錯題，可以從以下三方面去考慮：1．快速閱讀短文，如抓住中心思想，從整體上對短文有個了解． 2．充分運(yùn)用語言的基礎(chǔ)知識，從句型結(jié)構(gòu)、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習(xí)慣用法出發(fā)，進(jìn)行分析判斷，盡快找出錯誤在何處． 3．重視整體和語境，從上下文關(guān)系中找出表達(dá)連接關(guān)系或邏輯關(guān)系的詞或詞組，判斷是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系還是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，是因果關(guān)系還是讓步關(guān)系．