Question

17．請描述如圖所示的圖片，并談?wù)勀愕母惺埽?

Answer 1

分析 本文為看圖作文，主題是"要用積極樂觀的心態(tài)面對生活"．寫作時(shí)可按"三段式"來寫，首先描述圖片點(diǎn)明主題，然后分析概述其含義，發(fā)表感想．基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱以第三人稱為主．重要短語：do some actions （做一些動作…），look like…（看上去像…），be faced with （面臨，面對），manage to do （成功地做某事），have a positive attitude toward…（對…有積極的態(tài)度），have great influence on（有很大影響），keep peace（保持平靜）．

解答 As is vividly shown in the picture，an old granny who looks ugly in a wheelchair does some actions．The actions reflect on the wall，which makes her look like a young beautiful girl．（描述圖片）【高分句型】
The picture conveys that some people are positive when they are faced with life．They are always so energetic and enterprising that they manage to finish most of tasks well．Life returns color to those people who have positive and optimistic attitudes toward life．（聯(lián)系實(shí)際，反映問題）【高分句型】
Now that a positive attitude can lead us a better life，how can we develop a positive attitude？For one thing，we should hold a dream about future to provide our life a clear direction．For another，it is necessary for us to be confident which is the energy of life，perhaps the beauty of life．【高分句型】Whether we can find it have a great influence on our attitude towards life，so we should keep peace in our heart to find the beauty of life．In my opinion，if we can do like that mentioned above，better life will hug us tightly．（觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評 寫作看圖作文時(shí)，首先認(rèn)真看圖，結(jié)合圖片和文字，確定所要表達(dá)的主題是什么，然后圍繞主題，提煉要點(diǎn)，合理想象，對譯出的要點(diǎn)通過合理的組合，加上必要的連接詞使表達(dá)連貫．同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．