4.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號() 并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
In the past my hometown was the most beautiful place.Thick trees and green grass could be seen anywhere.In order to build more house and grow more crops,people cut down much more trees.As time went on,the whole forest was almost destroyed.Gradually,the green hills turn wasteland.As a result,sandstorms struck us now and then,from what we suffered a lot.But I do wish all the people could realize the terribly disaster caused by man.What's more,they should take good care of our nature and punish those who against the law.

分析 作者在本文講述了自己 的家鄉(xiāng)的變化,由此呼吁人們要保護(hù)環(huán)境,保護(hù)大自然.

解答 In the past my hometown was the most beautiful place.Thick trees and green grass could be seen anywhere.In order to build more house and grow more crops,people cut down much more trees.As time went on,the whole forest was almost destroyed.Gradually,the green hills turn wasteland.As a result,sandstorms struck us now and then,from what we suffered a lot.But I do wish all the people could realize the terribly disaster caused by man.What's more,they should take good care of our nature and punish those who∧against the law.
詳解:
1.the改為a;考查冠詞,most前面加a表示"非常,特別",表示極大程度,而不進(jìn)行"比較",此處意為"我的家鄉(xiāng)曾經(jīng)是一個(gè)非常美麗的地方".
2.a(chǎn)nywhere改為everywhere;考查句意,分析句意為"隨處可見茂密的樹林和綠色的草地",故用everywhere.   
3.house改為houses;考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù),house為可數(shù)名詞,前面有more(更多的) 修飾,故用復(fù)數(shù)形式. 
4.much改為many;考查近義詞辨析,trees是可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式,要用many修飾,much修飾不可數(shù)名詞.   
5.turn改為turned;考查動詞的時(shí)態(tài),此處的動作發(fā)生在過去,要用一般過去式.    
6.what改為which;考查關(guān)系代詞,這是一個(gè)非限制性定語從句,關(guān)系代詞在介詞from之后,只能用which.     
7.But改為So;考查連詞,結(jié)合句意分析上下文之間為因果關(guān)系,故用so表示‘因此".
8.terribly改為terrible;考查形容詞,此處用形容詞作定語修飾名詞disaster.     
9.they改為we;考查人稱代詞,這里想說"此外,我們應(yīng)該照顧好森",所以they改為we.      
10.who后面加are;考查動詞,against這里是形容詞,不能獨(dú)立作謂語,前面加be,構(gòu)成細(xì)表結(jié)構(gòu),又因who指代前面的those,故加are.

點(diǎn)評 整體把握短文大意,弄清短文的基本時(shí)態(tài),分析句子之間的結(jié)構(gòu)關(guān)系,結(jié)合上下文語境運(yùn)用詞匯,語法等基礎(chǔ)知識找出文中的錯(cuò)誤并加以修改.

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