Question

【題目】書面表達

假定你是李華，將于今年七月從新星外語學校畢業(yè)，你從報紙上得知B&B公司要招聘一名英文秘書，你很感興趣。請給該公司寫一封求職信，包括下列要點：

1．成績優(yōu)秀； 2. 能熟練使用電腦； 3. 業(yè)余愛好…

注意： 1.詞數(shù)不少于50； 2.開頭語和結束語不計入字數(shù)。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. __________________________________________________________________________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I learned from the newspaper that your company needs an English secretary. I’m really interested in this position and hope I can work for you.

I will be graduating from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July. I’m an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. Skilled at using computers, I can type very fast. In my spare time, I read a lot. Poems are my favorite. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. Besides, I’m easy to get along with and I like to make friends.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

【解析】

試題分析：本問是一篇求職信，內容是關于自己的優(yōu)點1．成績優(yōu)秀；2. 能熟練使用電腦；3. 業(yè)余愛好。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確要點。2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內進行分析、構思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。本文寫作時可以按照提示的3個方面的內容進行說明。3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時。以第一人稱為主。4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構。比如非謂語動詞Skilled at using computers和Being an active young person作狀語, 此外，文章還使用了短語among the top 5,get along with和besides的使用使文章內容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。