Question

【題目】近年來，中學生普遍缺乏自我保護意識，這一問題備受關(guān)注，請你用英語寫一篇短文：

1．概述中學生自我保護的重要性；

2．就如何保護自己，談談你的看法(至少兩點)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2．開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Recently，it has been a great public concern that the students lack selfprotection awareness.

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Answer 1

【答案】Recently，it has been a great public concern that the students lack selfprotection awareness.

There is a lack of social experience among students and therefore learning how to protect ourselves is of great significance to us all. For one thing，security comes first. Without security，we can achieve nothing and cannot live up to parents’ expectations. For another thing，protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the students，which is associated with the happiness of every family. Meanwhile，it also helps to build a more harmonious society.

Personally，in order to protect us students，above all，we should strengthen our security awareness. Besides，when accidents occur，we should calm down and turn to teachers or parents for help. The government also plays a leading role in protecting students. In a word，only by the combined efforts of every side involved can we live and study in harmony.

【解析】本題考查提綱類作文。首先要認真審題，近年來，中學生普遍缺乏自我保護意識，這一問題備受關(guān)注，請你用英語寫一篇短文：1．概述中學生自我保護的重要性；2．就如何保護自己，談談你的看法(至少兩點)。其次要確定時態(tài)，表示經(jīng)常反復發(fā)生的動作，所以這篇文章要使用一般現(xiàn)在時。然后要確定文章的結(jié)構(gòu)，文章開頭簡要說明近年來，中學生普遍缺乏自我保護意識這一現(xiàn)象，接著簡要說明中學生自我保護的重要性，文章最后就如何保護自己給出建議。在寫作過程中，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合題目所給出的信息，不要出現(xiàn)偏題問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有文采。正確使用寫信的格式，詞數(shù)控制在一百左右。

【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。例如 ：.For one thing…For another thing…一方面……另一方面......學習中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。另外這篇短文還使用了一些高級句型。例如：For another thing，protecting ourselves contributes to the healthy development of the students，which is associated with the happiness of every family. 這里含有一個非限制性定語從句。