Question

【題目】你校英文報“好人好事”欄目正面向全體學生征稿。請根據以下三幅圖的先后順序，用英語寫一篇短文，記述你和朋友幫助一位老人的過程并投稿。

注意：詞數100左右（開頭已給出，但不計入總詞數）。

參考詞匯：ambulance（n. 救護車） a sense of responsibility（責任感）

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Answer 1

【答案】It was a Sunday afternoon. I was playing in the park with my friend when I saw an old man lying on the ground. I tried to help him stand up, but he couldn't move and seemed in pain. Not knowing what to do, I asked my friend to call an ambulance. Soon the ambulance arrived. We helped carry the old man on the ambulance. The doctor praised us for what we did, which made us very happy.

In my opinion，everyone of us should have a sense of responsibility and a caring heart. Whenever we see anyone in need of help, we should give them a hand without hesitation.

【解析】這是一篇看圖作文。根據題干可知：你校英文報“好人好事”欄目正面向全體學生征稿。要求根據以下三幅圖的先后順序，用英語寫一篇短文，記述你和朋友幫助一位老人的過程并投稿。

同時要注意以下幾點：

1.根據先后順序，準確將每張圖的意思表達出來。

2. 要點要齊全。但是不要對要點進行簡單的羅列�？梢允褂眠m當的連接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。

3.注意語氣，貼近主題“好人好事”，最后應做出總結性言辭。

【范文亮點】

1.文章層次分明，準確地將圖片含義表達了出來，語言生動流暢。

2.文章運用了" In my opinion ，in need of，without hesitation"等高分詞語，此外，還運用了“I was playing in the park with my friend when I saw an old man lying on the ground.”等狀語從句，＂The doctor praised us for what we did, which made us very happy.＂等非限制性定語從句。