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【題目】During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I find a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and another animals. Last winter when I went here again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of chicken. They also had a small pond, which they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by sell the fish. I felt happily that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return for every two years, but he agreed.

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【答案】During my last winter holiday, I went to countryside with my father to visit my grandparents. I a change there. The first time I went there, they were living in a small house with dogs, ducks, and animals. Last winter when I went again, they had a big separate house to raise dozens of . They also had a small pond they raised fish. My grandpa said last summer they earned quite a lot by the fish. I felt that their life had improved. At the end of our trip, I told my father that I planned to return every two years, he agreed.

【解析】本文是一篇記敘文。文章主要講述了作者在去年寒假期間和父親去鄉(xiāng)下拜訪爺爺奶奶過程中的所見所聞，由此講述了鄉(xiāng)下的巨大變化。

1. countryside前加the 考查冠詞。去年寒假，我和父親去鄉(xiāng)下拜訪爺爺奶奶。此處特指去的是鄉(xiāng)下，故加定冠詞the。

2. find改成found 考查動詞時態(tài)。根據(jù)文章中的During my last winter holiday可知，事件發(fā)生在過去，故用過去時。故將find改成found。

3. another改成other 考查形容詞的用法。他們住在一個小房子里，院子里有狗、鴨子和其他牲畜。another表示“總數(shù)為三個以上中任意的另一個”，other表示“別的”，“另外的”，只能與復(fù)數(shù)名詞連用。根據(jù)后面的animals可知，將another改成other。

4. here改成there 考查副詞及語意理解。去年冬天我又一次去了那里。故將here改成there。

5. chicken改成chickens 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。他們擁有一個大的獨立住宅，還養(yǎng)了許多只雞。根據(jù)前文的dozens of可知，其后用名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式。

6. which前加in或改為where 考查定語從句的關(guān)系詞。他們還有一個小池塘，里面養(yǎng)著魚。此處a small pond是先行詞，其在后面的定語從句中作地點狀語，故用in which或where。

7. sell改成selling 考查動名詞。去年夏天他們通過賣魚掙了一大筆錢。此處介詞by后用動名詞，故用selling。

8. happily改成happy 考查形容詞作表語。他們的生活有了很大提高，我感到很高興。felt在此是系動詞，要用形容詞作表語，故將happily改成happy。

9. 刪除for 考查介詞的用法。時間名詞有every，each，last等詞修飾時，其前不用介詞。故刪除for。

10. but改成and 考查并列連詞的用法。我計劃每兩年回來一次，他同意了。此處是并列關(guān)系，故將but改成and。