Question

假如英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞：
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
An old man has been waiting at the bus stop. After a few minutes, the bus arrived but did not stop. The man who thought it would stop a bit far so he started running after the bus. Fortunately, the bus never stopped. The man kept follow the bus until he realized that he arrived home. The man was so happy that he could save a bit money. He happily told his wife, “Honey, today I ran after the buses until arriving home. I didn’t have to pay the fee. “Surprisingly, the wife blamed his husband,” Do you know how many you could save, if you ran after a taxi ? ”

Answer 1

【小題1】 has改成had
【小題2】去掉who
【小題3】far改成 farther
【小題4】Fortunately 改成Unfortunately
【小題5】follow 改成following
【小題6】so改成very
【小題7】a bit∧of
【小題8】buses改成 bus
【小題9】his改成 her
【小題10】many 改成much

解析試題分析：
【小題1】這個(gè)老人在汽車到之前一直在等，用過(guò)去完成時(shí)，has改成had
【小題2】這是個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，主語(yǔ)是the man，去掉who
【小題3】a bit后面接比較級(jí)：far改成 farther
【小題4】從后面的句子：the bus never stopped.可知是不幸的：Fortunately 改成Unfortunately
【小題5】keep doing一直做：follow 改成following
【小題6】這不是so…that…句型：是老人很高興省下了錢。so改成very
【小題7】a bit of后面接不可數(shù)名詞
【小題8】指代前面走掉的公共汽車，是單數(shù)：buses改成 bus
【小題9】her 指代老人的妻子。
【小題10】how much指多少錢
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)
點(diǎn)評(píng)：考查考生在上下文中運(yùn)用語(yǔ)法的能力和對(duì)文章細(xì)節(jié)的理解。對(duì)詞匯的使用要準(zhǔn)確，還有單詞的指代關(guān)系要關(guān)注上下文的理解。