Question

【題目】假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，不慎遺失校圖書館的書籍Adventurers in Desert, 對此深表歉意。請根據(jù)以下要點給校圖書館寫一封電子郵件。

1.表示歉意。

2.給予解釋。

3.你的打算。

注意：

1、詞數(shù)100左右；

2、適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3、格式已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last week. The name of the book is Adventurers in Deserts.

I read it every evening and had intended to finish it the following week, but unfortunately yesterday when I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. I tried to find it but I failed. I really had no idea what to do with it, but I promise to pay for the loss of the book. I know money cannot cover the loss and it is I who am to blame. This is also a warning to me to be careful in the future. I will pay a visit to you on Thursday afternoon to talk over the compensation for the missing book.

I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble that might have been caused by my carelessness. Definitely, such a thing will never happen again.

Yours.

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，要求對你不慎遺失校圖書館的書籍Adventurers in Desert寫一封道歉信。此類作文通常分三段來寫，第一段說明寫信的目的；第二段介紹事情，第三段再次表示道歉。成文時要注意：1.文章主要用第一人稱；2.時態(tài)：靈活變換；3.文章的內(nèi)容要點要齊全：（1）表示歉意；（2）給予解釋；（3）你的打算。4.注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，以提高文章的檔次；5.注意使用一些連接詞，使得文章表達自然、流暢。6.注意文章的字?jǐn)?shù)控制，100單詞左右。

【亮點說明】

本文屬于提綱類作文，采用三段式，格式正確，語言簡練，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，布局合理，使用高級句子。I am awfully sorry to tell you that I have lost the book I borrowed from your library last week.使用賓語從句；when I came back to my room, it was nowhere to be found. when引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句；I know money cannot cover the loss and it is I who am to blame.句中運用強調(diào)句式；I apologize again for any inconvenience or trouble that might have been caused by my carelessness. that定語從句使用得當(dāng)；另外，had intended to finish, but unfortunately等的運用為文章增色添彩。