Question

9．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下通知的內(nèi)容，以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義寫一則書面通知．

通知  活動(dòng)目的：進(jìn)一步提高全校師生的應(yīng)急疏散能力、自我保護(hù)能力和安全意識(shí) 指揮者：校長(zhǎng) 活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)：學(xué)校操場(chǎng) 演練時(shí)間：2014 年 11 月 8 日下午 3：30 參加人員：全校師生 注意事項(xiàng)：1．服從引導(dǎo)員的指揮 2．各班按次序撤離 3．保持鎮(zhèn)靜，不能發(fā)生擠、踏、踩等事故 4．安全第一 學(xué)生會(huì) 2014 年 11 月 7 日

注意：1．通知要包括以上提供的所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容連貫．
2．詞數(shù)：100 左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
3．參考詞匯：疏散演練：evacuation exercise引導(dǎo)員：guide

NOTICE
Earthquakes are one of the most dangerous among all natural disasters．In order to help both teachers and students deal with emergencies and save themselves in case the earthquake breaks out，an evacuation exercise will be held on the playground in our school at 3：30 p．m．on November 8，2014．（高分句型一） The activity will be commanded by our headmaster．The evacuation exercise is mainly about how to survive an earthquake．We must do as follows．Firstly，everyone must obey the guide's command．Secondly，everyone shall leave the classrooms in order when the alarm clock goes off．Above all，we must keep calm during the evacuation exercise，avoiding pushing and stepping on each other．（高分句型二）
Everyone is required to be present on time，making adequate preparations for the earthquake emergencies．（高分句型三）Nothing is more important than safety．Safety first!
Students'Union November 7，2014．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下通知的內(nèi)容，以學(xué)生會(huì)的名義寫一則書面通知，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：活動(dòng)目的，活動(dòng)地點(diǎn)，演練時(shí)間，參加人員等  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：In order to以便，為了；deal with應(yīng)對(duì)，處理；in case 以防，萬一；break out爆發(fā)；Above all最重要的是；make adequate preparations for做好充分準(zhǔn)備；
In order to help both teachers and students deal with emergencies and save themselves in case the earthquake breaks out，an evacuation exercise will be held on the playground in our school at 3：30 p．m．on November 8，2014．（高分句型一）
Above all，we must keep calm during the evacuation exercise，avoiding pushing and stepping on each other．（高分句型二）
Everyone is required to be present on time，making adequate preparations for the earthquake emergencies．（高分句型三）

解答 NOTICE
       Earthquakes are one of the most dangerous among all natural disasters．In order to help both teachers and students deal with emergencies and save themselves in case the earthquake breaks out，an evacuation exercise will be held on the playground in our school at 3：30 p．m．on November 8，2014．（高分句型一） The activity will be commanded by our headmaster．The evacuation exercise is mainly about how to survive an earthquake．We must do as follows． Firstly，everyone must obey the guide's command．Secondly，everyone shall leave the classrooms in order when the alarm clock goes off．Above all，we must keep calm during the evacuation exercise，avoiding pushing and stepping on each other．（高分句型二）
       Everyone is required to be present on time，making adequate preparations for the earthquake emergencies．（高分句型三）Nothing is more important than safety．Safety first!
                                                                                                                                                                                            Students'Union
                                                                                                                                                                                     November 7，2014

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．