Question

【題目】假定你是李華，今年二月你隨父母去倫敦旅游�，F(xiàn)因當(dāng)時(shí)找回丟失的錢包，用英語給Steveston London Secondary School 的校長寫一封感謝信，感謝該校拾金不昧的學(xué)生Alvin Hill。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，簡(jiǎn)述丟失和找回錢包的過程，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：大英博物館the British Museum護(hù)照passport

Dear Sir/ Madam,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir / Madam,

I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I’m now writing to convey my sincere thanks to one of your students for his kindness.

In February, I, together with my parents, spent a delightful holiday in London, where we paid a visit to many world famous tourist attractions including the London Eye, Westminster Abbey, the Tower of London and the British Museum. One day, it took us a whole day to tour the British Museum. So enjoyable a time did we have that it was not until we went back to the hotel where we stayed that we realized my father’s wallet was missing. We were more than worried because in addition to a large sum of money, the wallet also contained our passports and air tickets. We were at a loss as for what to do when the manager of the hotel came, followed by a boy, who picked up the wallet by chance. We were so relieved and grateful. Later, we learned from the manager that he is a student from your school, named Alvin Hill.

Again, I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to him and the school he attends.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】首先審題，用英語給Steveston London Secondary School 的校長寫一封感謝信，感謝該校拾金不昧的學(xué)生Alvin Hill。任務(wù)中給出的提示信息包含如下內(nèi)容：簡(jiǎn)述丟失和找回錢包的過程。抓住了這亮點(diǎn)，我們就抓住了文章的核心內(nèi)容。其次選用正確的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)，考慮用一般過去時(shí)，第一人稱來寫。然后寫出單個(gè)句子，使用正確的連詞，連句成段。具體來說，寫這篇文章時(shí)，要注意:1、提示中的內(nèi)容比較泛泛，需要適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充；2、為使文章層次清楚，可分三個(gè)自然段寫：第一自然段說明自己寫信的目的；第二自然段敘述事情的經(jīng)過；第三自然段再次表達(dá)自己的感謝之情。這篇文章對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語，為文章增色不少，如: together with和，pick up撿起。還使用了定語從句In February, I, together with my parents, spent a delightful holiday in London, where we paid a visit to many world famous tourist attractions including the London Eye, Westminster Abbey, the Tower of London and the British Museum.和定語從句We were at a loss as for what to do when the manager of the hotel came, followed by a boy, who picked up the wallet by chance.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。