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　　假如你是李華，家住江蘇南京上海路80號，1999年暑假參加了全國中學(xué)生英語夏令營.請根據(jù)所給要點，用英語給加拿大的筆友Thomas寫一封信，談?wù)勏牧顮I的情況和你的感受.寫信日期：2000年8月10日.

　　注意：(1) 信須包括表格提供的內(nèi)容要點，可以適當(dāng)增減細(xì)節(jié)，使信意思連貫：

　　　　  (2) 詞數(shù)：100左右；

　　　　  (3) 信的開頭已寫在下面，不計入總詞數(shù).

生詞：全國中學(xué)生外語能力競賽：NEPCS

比賽：competition

交流：exchange

80 Shanghai Road

Nanjing Jiangsu，PRC

Aug．10，1998

Dear Thomas,

　　Nice to hear from you again．__________________________________

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寫作思路點撥 (1) 格式：看圖表寫信 (2) 人稱：第一人稱，第三人稱 (3) 時態(tài)：一般過去時 (4) 短語：hear from收到……來信；summer vacation暑假；at the end of在……末；summer camp夏令營；English speech competition英語講演比賽；places of interest名勝；all the time一直，始終；make friends with與……交朋友；have great fun玩得很開心. (5) 要點 ① 營址：煙臺市 ② 活動日期：七月底，四天 ③ 參加人員：全國中學(xué)生外語競賽獲勝者，中國、美國、英國和澳大利亞英語教師 ④ 活動內(nèi)容：舉行英語講演比賽；觀看學(xué)生表演，游覽名勝；交流英語學(xué)習(xí)經(jīng)驗 ⑤ 感受：提高了英語口語能力；交了許多朋友；玩得很開心 (6) 草擬要點成英語 ① summer camp to be held in Yantai ② time of the summer camp: four days, at the end of July ③ winners of NEPCS to go to a four-day summer camp, some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia to join us ④ to have an English speech competition, to watch wonderful performances given by the students in Yantai, to visit some places of interest, to exchange our learning English experience ⑤ to have improved our spoken English, to have made many friends, to have great fun in the camp (7) 擴展要點成句 ① A summer camp was held in Yantai. ② Time was four days, at the end of July. ③ The winners of NEPCS went to the summer camp. Some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia joined us. ④ We had an English speech competition, watched wonderful performances given by the students in Yantai and visited some places of interest. We exchanged our English learning experience. ⑤We have improved-our spoken English and made many new friends. We had great fun in the camp. (8) 適當(dāng)調(diào)整句型，盡可能多地使用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯，合理使用語句間的連接成分，謀篇組句成文. 80 Shanghai Road Nanjing, Jiangsu, PRC Aug. 10, 2000 　　Dear Thomas, 　　Nice to hear from you again. This summer vacation, at the end of July, we winners of NEPCS went to a four-day summer camp held in Yantai. Some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia joined us. We had an English speech competition, watched wonderful performances given by the students in Yantai and visited some places of interest. Besides, we exchanged our English learning experience. All the time English was spoken. Thus our spoken English has greatly improved and I have made many new friends, we really had great fun in the camp. 　　With best wishes! Yours, Li Hua (9) 語言運用提示 　　Nice to hear from you.是 It's nice to hear from you.的省略；a four-day summer camp held in Yantai中, four-day是復(fù)合形容詞作定語, held in Yantai是過示分詞短語作后置定語，都是修飾summer camp.