Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文， 并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

Preparing for the future A senior 3 student is participating special oath-taking(誓師大會)online at home.	Teaching dance online A teacher is demonstrating her dance moves for online classes due to novel coronarvirus outbreak	Supporting community's recovery A community worker bought bags of medicines for residents on lockdown in at community.

（寫作內容）

1、用30個詞概括上述圖片及文字內容;

2、用約120個單詞結合自己經歷談談我們學生應如何努力共戰(zhàn)病毒。

（寫作要求）

1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句;

2.作文中不能出現真實姓名和學校名稱;

3.不必寫標題。

（評分標準）

內容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數適當。

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Answer 1

【答案】In order to prevent and control the novel coronavirus-related pneumonia, teachers and students arrange all teaching activities online and communities on lockdown are offered supplies by their workers.

During this special period, as senior high students, on one hand, we should interact with teachers actively with necessary classes attended, discussing and asking questions online. To develop the spirit of independence, we must take online exams honestly .On the other hand, we should try our best not to go out ,emphasizing the importance of hygiene. When schools open , wearing masks is a must, and windows are to be opened regularly to let clean air in.

What’s more, it is a good chance to receive the education of love and life. When foreigners prefer to go to China during this disaster, we are proud of being Chinese and determine to devote ourselves to study and bring prosperity to our motherland

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于讀寫任務，要求考生根據所給的圖片及文字內容并結合自己經歷談談學生應如何努力共戰(zhàn)病毒。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)應為一般現在時。

結構：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內容。

要求：1. 概括所給的圖片及文字內容。（summarize the pictures and words given）

2. 談談學生應如何努力共戰(zhàn)病毒。（talk about how students should work hard to fight the virus）

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

in order to; on one hand…on the other hand; interact with; try our best to; emphasize the importance of; it is a good chance to; prefer to; are proud of; determine to

第三步：連詞成句

1. In order to prevent and control the novel coronavirus-related pneumonia ，teachers and students arrange all teaching activities online and communities on lockdown are offered supplies by their workers.

2. During this special period, as senior high students, on one hand, we should interact with teachers actively with necessary classes attended, discussing and asking questions online.

3. To develop the spirit of independence, we must take online exams honestly.

4. On the other hand, we should try our best not to go out, emphasizing the importance of hygiene.

5. When schools open, wearing masks is a must, and windows are to be opened regularly to let clean air in.

6. What’s more, it is a good chance to receive the education of love and life.

7. When foreigners prefer to go to China during this disaster, we are proud of being Chinese and determine to devote ourselves to study and bring prosperity to our motherland.

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

第五步：潤色修改