分析 本題考查電子郵件寫作,主要圍繞開導(dǎo)自己的好友,故郵件寫作時要注意語氣,要具有鼓舞性.題目要點已經(jīng)給出,注意不要漏掉要點.范文結(jié)構(gòu)為兩段式的分總結(jié)構(gòu),第一段為開導(dǎo)和勸慰,第二段收束全文.第一段第一句中I am sorry to hear that you didn't do well in 我很遺憾聽說….為全文奠定了一個感情基調(diào),即帶有一種同情勸慰性的語氣;第二句中so there is no need to feel too bad.使用了there is no need to…沒有必要…的固定句式;第四句Why not go on an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music?使用了一個疑問句,使得文章十分富有感情;第五句If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most,they may give you some practical advice that helps you to improve.使用了if領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句;最后一句Probably it's time for you to explore a new learning method which is better and more suitable for you.使用了which領(lǐng)導(dǎo)的定語從句.在短語使用上,使用了do well 做得好,In my opinion 在我看來,At this moment 此時,cheer up 高興起來,it's time to…是做…的時候等十分經(jīng)典的常用短語.在詞語使用上,本文詞語拿捏恰到好處,使得文章十分富有感情,如第一句I am sorry to hear that you 中sorry一詞的使用,以及最后一句I hope you can 中hope一詞的使用,極富勸慰性,可以說文章的語氣拿捏十分好,是文章最大亮點所在.總結(jié):類似這類開導(dǎo)性勸慰性的郵件寫作時要注意語氣的拿捏,這會成為文章一大亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):
In my view,Chinese is the most difficult for most foreign students,so there is no need to feel too bad.(高分句型一)
If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most,they may give you some practical advice that helps to improve.(高分句型二)
Probably it's time for you to explore a new learning method that is better and more suitable for you.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Mike,
I'm sorry to hear that you didn't do well in your Chinese study and have lost interest in schoolwork.In my view,Chinese is the most difficult for most foreign students,so there is no need to feel too bad.(高分句型一)At this moment,you should cheer up and find ways to relieve your anxiety.Why not go for an outing with your friends or find time to listen to your favorite music?If you can talk to the teachers who you respect most,they may give you some practical advice that helps to improve.(高分句型二)Probably it's time for you to explore a new learning method that is better and more suitable for you.(高分句型三)
Anyhow,I do hope you cab rebuild your self-confidence soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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