Question

8．下面短文中共有10處語言錯誤．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加上一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞．2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不記分．
My uncle lives in the countryside．I still remember the days when I paid a visit to him in last summer．I made friend with many boys of my age here．All of them were easy to get along with．They taught me how to swim in the river but I taught themselves English．Some boys was left behind to live with their grandparents because their parents went to cities to making a living．Though they lived hard life，they studied hard．How I hope I can help them as much as possibly!Now I often kept in touch with them by writing letters．

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分析 短文大意：本文介紹了我的叔叔住在鄉(xiāng)下，我仍然記得去年夏天去拜訪他的日子．我在那里交了許多朋友，他們都很容易相處，他們教我如何在河里游泳，我教他們英語．有些男孩子被留在家里跟爺爺奶奶住，這是因為他們的父母到城里謀生，盡管他們生活困難，但是他們學習很努力，作者現(xiàn)在經(jīng)常寫信與他們保持聯(lián)系．

解答 My uncle lives in the countryside．
I still remember the days when I paid a visit to him in last summer．
I made friendwith many boys of my age here．
All of them were easy to get along with．
They taught me how to swim in the river but I taught themselves English．
Some boys was left behind to live with their grandparents because their parents went to cities to making a living．
Though they lived∧hard life，they studied hard．
How I hope I can help them as much as possibly!Now I often kept in touch with them by writing letters．
1．去掉in 介詞誤用．last summer"去年夏天"，可以直接做狀語，前面不需要加介詞．
2．friend改為friends 名詞單復數(shù)用錯．根據(jù)下文可知作者是與許多男孩子交朋友，因此此處用復數(shù)．
3．here改為there 副詞用錯．根據(jù)語境可知是作者回憶的去年夏天的事情，應該是在那里他交了很多朋友．
4．but改為and 連詞用錯．根據(jù)語境可知此處表示并列，不表示轉折．
5．themselves改為them 代詞誤用．此處表示"我教他們英語"，而不是"他們自己"．
6．was改為were 謂語動詞單復數(shù)用錯．此處主語some boys是復數(shù)，因此謂語動詞也用復數(shù)．
7．making改為make 非謂語動詞用錯．此處前面的to為不定式符號，因此后面用動詞原形．這里是不定式短語作狀語表示目的．
8．lived后面加a 冠詞用錯．本句live a hard life意思是"過著艱苦的生活"，此處加上a表示泛指概念．
9．possibly改為possible 形容詞誤用．此處as much as possible表示"盡可能多的"，應用形容詞形式．
10．kept改為keep 時態(tài)用錯．本句前面有Now，說的是現(xiàn)在的情況，因此應用一般現(xiàn)在時．

點評 本題考查短文改錯．短文改錯題是高考題型之一，它注重考查考生對所學基礎知識及語法的掌握程度，要求考生平時要積累大量的語言及語法知識，做題時還要充分考慮語境，結合所學知識做出正確的判斷．