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4．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華．你校將于6月26日接待來(lái)自于美國(guó)某中學(xué)的學(xué)生訪問(wèn)團(tuán)．你受學(xué)校委托，負(fù)責(zé)安排在津的一日活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，用英語(yǔ)給該團(tuán)的領(lǐng)隊(duì)Smith 先生寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，介紹活動(dòng)計(jì)劃并簡(jiǎn)要說(shuō)明理由，最后征求對(duì)方意見(jiàn)．
上午與我校學(xué)生座談（話題如校園生活、文化差異等）；
中午與我校學(xué)生共同進(jìn)餐（午餐包括餃子、面條等）；
下午與我校學(xué)生游覽海河．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)不少于100；
2．可是當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；
3．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)．
參考詞匯：
海河 the Haihe River
Dear Mr Smith
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School．We're pleased to hear that your US School Delegation will pay a visit to our school in Tianjin，China．With the commission of our school headmaster，I'm fully responsible for your one-day tour to our
school and our city．The following are our preliminary arrangements for your review and comments．
Students from both countries will hold a discussion in the morning to enhance their understanding．The topics to be discussed include but not limited to campus life，culture differences and so on．America students are cordially invited to share traditional Chinese dinner with us；
the main courses are our local cruises，including Chinese noodles and water dumplings．In the afternoon，after a short rest，we will visit Haihe River by boat，seeing the wonderful and beautiful scenes of Haihe，witnessing the great changes that have taken place in Tianjin during the past few years．
Please feedback whether you're satisfied with this schedule，and we
will make changes as per your opinion in due course．
Yours sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本作文為書(shū)信，書(shū)信格式已在題目中已提供．考生需根據(jù)所列出的提綱回信，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括提綱里的內(nèi)容．時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱為第一人稱．重要短語(yǔ)：with the commission of （受…委任），preliminary arrangements（初步安排），enhance（提高，增強(qiáng)），be limited to（局限于），cordially（真誠(chéng)地），cruises（游覽），as per（按照），in due course（到時(shí)候）．

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
I am Li Hua，chairman of the Student Union，from Chenguang High School．We're pleased to hear that your US School Delegation will
pay a visit to our school in Tianjin，China．With the commission of our school headmaster，I'm fully responsible for your one-day tour to our
school and our city．The following are our preliminary arrangements foryour review and comments．（開(kāi)頭：意圖）
   Students from both countries will hold a discussion in the morningto enhance their understanding．The topics to be discussed include but not limited to campus life，culture differences and so on．（上午活動(dòng)安排：座談）America students are cordially invited to share traditional Chinese dinner with us；the main courses are our local cruises，including Chinese noodles and water dumplings．（中午共同進(jìn)餐）In the afternoon，after a short rest，we will visit Haihe River by boat，seeing the wonderful and beautiful scenes of Haihe，witnessing the great changes that have taken place in Tianjin during thepast few years．（下午安排）【高分句型】
   Please feedback whether you're satisfied with this schedule，and we will make changes as per your opinion in due course．（結(jié)尾：期待回復(fù)）
                                                                         Yours sincerely
                                                                          Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書(shū)信類(lèi)作文還要注意書(shū)信格式．提綱作文在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)，寫(xiě)作邏輯循序是否合理．寫(xiě)作方面，考生在平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型，可以根據(jù)話題來(lái)對(duì)短語(yǔ)進(jìn)行歸類(lèi)，比如環(huán)保類(lèi)題材，書(shū)信類(lèi)題材，議論問(wèn)體等等，這樣寫(xiě)作文要用到時(shí)就能信手拈來(lái)，寫(xiě)出好文章來(lái)．