6.假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華,你和在上海上學(xué)的英國(guó)朋友Tom約好下周末去北京旅行,但你因故不能赴約.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語給他寫一封電子郵件:1 表示歉意  2 解釋原因  3 另約時(shí)間.
Dear Tom,
I'm sorry,for I won't be able to
go to Beijing with you next weekend,which I have promised.【高分句型】I feel sorry for it and want you to know what happened.(表示歉意)
Just now,my cousin,Li Qing,who left home to Australia for his further study last year,informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family.【高分句型】You know,we haven't seen each other for nearly a year.(解釋原因)
I sincerely hope you can accept my appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing.Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.(另約時(shí)間)Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours
Li Hua.

分析 本題是書信類作文,要求寫一封電子郵件,因?yàn)椴荒芨凹s向杰克表示歉意;解釋原因;還有另約時(shí)間.材料已給出,寫作的時(shí)候關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括,不能有遺漏和省略.還要有適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣�,同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序,運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文,同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采.審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般過去時(shí),描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語言,運(yùn)用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出.難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型,可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語準(zhǔn)確表述.
【亮點(diǎn)說明】I'm sorry,for I won't be able to go to Beijing with you next weekend,which I have promised.這句話用了非限制性定語從句,I feel sorry about it and want you to know what has happened.這句話用了賓語從句,Just now,my cousin,Li Qiong,who left home to Australia for his further study last year,informed me that he will return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family.這句話用了定語從句和賓語從句,I would appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Shanghai.這句話用了動(dòng)名詞的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu).Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.這句話用了過去分詞做定語.

解答 Dear Tom    
     I'm sorry,for I won't be able to go to Beijing with you next weekend,which I have promised.【高分句型】I feel sorry for it and want you to know what happened.(表示歉意)
     Just now,my cousin,Li Qing,who left home to Australia for his further study last year,informed me that he would return this Saturday morning and asked me to pick him up at the airport with his family.【高分句型】You know,we haven't seen each other for nearly a year.(解釋原因)
     I sincerely hope you can accept my appreciate your allowing me to make another date to show you around Beijing.Once again,I'm sorry for any inconvenience caused.(另約時(shí)間)
     Looking forward to your early reply.
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours
Li Hua.

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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