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【題目】假設(shè)你是李華, Chris是你校的國際交流生。一年一度的高考升學(xué)季來臨了,他作為口語輔導(dǎo)小老師受某剛被錄取到北大的學(xué)生及其家人邀請,到他們家做客。但是,由于他不知道去中國人家里做客有哪些習(xí)俗,便給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件,請你根據(jù)下列要點,給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件,給他一些建議。要點如下:

1.到達時間；2.適當送一些禮物；3.介紹中國的餐桌禮儀。

注意:

1.詞數(shù)100左右(文章開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出,不計入總詞數(shù))；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Dear Chris,

I have received your email of July 28. I am happy to hear that you, as a tutor of the graduate admitted to Beijing University this year, were invited to dinner at his home.

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I do wish your first Chinese home dinner an unforgettable experience.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chris，

I have received your email of July 28. I am happy to hear that you, as a tutor of the graduate admitted to Beijing University this year, were invited to dinner at his home. In response to your concerns about how to be a guest in China, I'd like to offer my personal advice.

Firstly, you'd better arrive a little earlier than the expected dinner time to save more time for the graduate's family to prepare dinner. Secondly, gifts like a book or a pen are acceptable. If possible, you can also send him a “red packet” containing 666 RMB meaning “successful in everything”. Moreover, we Chinese often treat guests with delicious dishes. When at table, you shouldn't start eating first but follow the host or the senior guests. Sometimes, the host will help you to some dishes, and you can just show your appreciation and gladly have them, which will please them all.

I do wish your first Chinese home dinner an unforgettable experience.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：審題。要求考生以李華的身份寫郵件，Chris是你校的國際交流生。一年一度的高考升學(xué)季來臨了,他作為口語輔導(dǎo)小老師受某剛被錄取到北大的學(xué)生及其家人邀請,到他們家做客。但是,由于他不知道去中國人家里做客有哪些習(xí)俗,便給你發(fā)了一封電子郵件,請你根據(jù)下列要點,給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件,給他一些建議。時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時為主。

第2步：確定要點：1.到達時間；2.適當送一些禮物；3.介紹中國的餐桌禮儀。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

范文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。作者在范文中使用了較多高級詞匯，如be admitted to, in response to；使用了非謂語動詞containing 666 RMB meaning “successful in everything”...文章中使用了較多的串聯(lián)詞，如firstly，secondly，moreover；這些串聯(lián)詞有機地把各要點串聯(lián)成一個整體。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。