Question

18．閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文．
Increased College Enrollment
In recent years，there is a steady increase in college enrollment．To many high-school students，it's definitely good news，for they would have better chance of receiving higher education．
You don't have to look very far to find out the advantages of the increased college enrollment．For one thing，it lessens the worries of both high school graduates and their parents．Besides，increased college enrollment can contribute to raise the educational level of our nation．What's more，increased college enrollment can provide more students with specialized knowledge，thus serving our development in a positive way．
On the other hand，we can not deny that there are some potential problems about increased college enrollment．To begin with，with the increased number of students，the shortage of teaching staff and facilities becomes clearly seen．Worst of all，increased college enrollment leads to increased competition in the job market．
It's not an easy task to tell whether the tendency should be encouraged．As to me，it's laudable to grant more students higher education．But a college degree is by no means a guarantee for a better job or future．To cast a promising career，we need a lot more abilities which we can not learn from college．
[寫作內(nèi)容]
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的要點(diǎn)；
2．然后用120個(gè)詞寫一篇文章，包括一下要點(diǎn)：
1）高校擴(kuò)招的益處：
①緩解了父母和高中生們的心理壓力；提高全國(guó)教育水平．
②培養(yǎng)更多有專長(zhǎng)的人才．
2）擴(kuò)招造成的一些問題：造成大學(xué)里師資和教學(xué)設(shè)施短缺；使就業(yè)市場(chǎng)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)更加激烈．
3）我對(duì)大學(xué)擴(kuò)招的看法
[寫作要求]
1）文章可參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不要抄襲閱讀材料中的句子；
2）不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3）題目自定．
[評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)]概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫任務(wù)型寫作，這類作文可按照三段式模板寫：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語(yǔ)言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱用第一和第三人稱． 重要短語(yǔ)：act as（充當(dāng)，擔(dān)任，擔(dān)當(dāng)），cultivate sb（培養(yǎng)某人），serve the society （服務(wù)社會(huì)），on the whole（ 總的來說，大體上），in favor of（支持），subscribe to （同意），relieve the high pressure（緩解壓力），to some extent（在某種程度上），raise the educational level（提高教育水平），on the contrary （相反），be opposed to（反對(duì)做某事），lead to（導(dǎo)致），intensify the competition （加強(qiáng)，強(qiáng)化競(jìng)爭(zhēng)），contribute to（促成），invest to do sth（投資做某事），guarantee sth （保證，確保某物）．
【高分句型一】
1．The college enrollment has risen steadily over the past years，which acts as a way to cultivate more well-educated people to serve the society．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為"The college enrollment has risen steadily over the past years"．"which"在從句中作主語(yǔ)．
【高分句型二】
2．On the whole，increased college enrollment is just like a double-edged sword，which has both benefits and potential shortcomings．
此處是由關(guān)系代詞"which"引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，主句為"increased college enrollment is just like a double-edged sword"．"which"在從句中作主語(yǔ)．
【高分句型三】
3．People ①who are in favor of the increased enrollment rate subscribe to the view ②that it not only relieves the high pressure on parents and students to some extent，but is also a suitable tool to raise the educational level in our country．
①此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為"People"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語(yǔ)．
 ②此處是由連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的同位語(yǔ)從句，解釋說明名詞"the view"的具體內(nèi)容．
【高分句型四】
4．On the contrary，there are also some people①who are opposed to this policy，②because they fear③that it will lead to the shortage of teaching staff and educational facilities．
①此處是由關(guān)系代詞"who"引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為"some people"，關(guān)系代詞"who"在從句中作主語(yǔ)．
②此處為連詞"because"引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句．
③此處為連接詞"that"引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句．

解答 The college enrollment has risen steadily over the past years，which acts as a way to cultivate more well-educated people to serve the society．【高分句型一】However，people's opinions on it are divided．（概括）
On the whole，increased college enrollment is just like a double-edged sword，which has both benefits and potential shortcomings．【高分句型二】People who are in favor of the increased enrollment rate subscribe to the view that it not only relieves the high pressure on parents and students to some extent，but is also a suitable tool to raise the educational level in our country．【高分句型三】What's more，it can also help to cultivate more young labors with specialties．（高校擴(kuò)招的益處）
     On the contrary，there are also some people who are opposed to this policy，because they fear that it will lead to the shortage of teaching staff and educational facilities．【高分句型四】Worse still，increased enrollment rate will intensify the already-fierce competition in job market．（擴(kuò)招造成的一些問題）
    In my point of view，this tendency should be continued，as we need more capable people to contribute to the fast-growing economy．But in the meantime，the government and universities ought to invest more to guarantee the quality of education．（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 讀寫任務(wù)型寫作是將閱讀與寫作有機(jī)結(jié)合，要求考生既能讀懂文章信息，又要依據(jù)要求規(guī)范連貫地表達(dá)內(nèi)容，其中準(zhǔn)確概括很有挑戰(zhàn)且十分重要，根據(jù)記敘文、議論文、說明文等不同文體作相應(yīng)概括，總的來說，遵循以下步驟：確定主題句；尋找關(guān)鍵詞；重構(gòu)主題句；重組支持句．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．