Question

【題目】最近中國的空氣質(zhì)量引起了廣泛的關(guān)注。請閱讀下面的漫畫，按要求用英語寫一篇短文

內(nèi)容要求：

1. 簡要描述漫畫內(nèi)容；

2. 簡要分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因；

3. 針對以上現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶ǎㄖ辽賰牲c(diǎn)）。

參考詞匯：

口罩mask； 霧霾haze

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Answer 1

【答案】

One Possible Version：

Recently ,the air quality in China has raised widespread concern. As is indicated in the picture, an old man and his grandson are taking a walk in the street with masks covering their mouths. As the haze is becoming heavier and heavier, they find it hard to see the buildings and trees around them clearly.

What the picture conveys here is that air pollution is quite severe in China. Many factors account for this phenomenon. In the first place, vehicles sending large quantities of poisonous gases are a major source of air pollution. Furthermore, factories that release a great deal of smoke are also responsible for the poor air quality. Besides, burning materials like coal or oil for homes and offices is another major contributor to air pollution.

Personally, to better the air quality, the government and the common citizens should make joint efforts. Riding and walking are wise options for public travels. Meanwhile, effective laws are supposed to be made to guarantee good air quality.

【解析】

試題分析：本題是一篇提綱類作文，主要內(nèi)容要求有： 1. 簡要描述漫畫內(nèi)容；2. 簡要分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因；3. 針對以上現(xiàn)象談?wù)勀阕约旱目捶ǎㄖ辽賰牲c(diǎn)）。寫時(shí)要注意不要套用，不要逐句翻譯。

亮點(diǎn)說明：本文用了經(jīng)典的三段式結(jié)構(gòu)，寫出了題中要求的幾個要點(diǎn)，用了賓語從句定語從句等使文章增色，同時(shí)用了Furthermore，Personally，Meanwhile等副詞讓文章條理清楚，具有特色。運(yùn)用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，進(jìn)行時(shí)等時(shí)態(tài)，很好的寫好了文章。