Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)下面四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你參加志愿活動的過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于 60。

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week, I, together with some of my classmates, participated in an activity with the theme of planting vegetables.

Upon hearing the news, some of us immediately decided to sign up. Then all of the participants were involved in a lecture, during which our teacher taught us some fundamental skills about how to get the vegetables well planted.

Having been fully prepared, we all gathered at our garden plot and attentively sowed the seeds into the field, wishing that they would flourish day by day. During the next few days, we came to see them on schedule, watered them, and exactly wrote down their growth diaries. As we expected, they sprouted and grew up with great energy, and at last, we gained a good harvest. We all smiled delightedly and our monitor took some pictures to memorize this amazing moment.

It turned out to be an unforgettable and fulfilling experience.

【解析】

本篇書面表達是圖畫作文，要求寫一篇周記描述你參加的一項志愿活動。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求根據(jù)四幅圖描述你參加的一項志愿活動：假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華。請根據(jù)下面四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述你參加志愿活動的過程，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如； participant（參與者），plant vegetables（種菜），fundamental skills（基本技巧），attentively（聚精會神地）， sow（播種），sprout （發(fā)芽），growth diary （成長日記），flourish（茁壯成長），fulfilling（有意義的），unforgettable（難忘的）及memorize（紀(jì)念）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。