Question

【題目】請閱讀下面短文及圖畫，并按照要求用英語寫一篇150詞左右的文章。

On a sunny day a shepherd (牧羊人) walked with his two hungry sheep along a winding country path. He managed to have them two tied to each other just in case they should go separated. It was quite a long time before they arrived at a place where there was merely a small amount of fresh grass on each side of the path. Both of the sheep were so hungry that they hurried to the grass but in the separate direction as the picture showed. Unfortunately the rope fastening them was not long enough. No matter how hard they struggled, neither was able to reach the grass in front of them.

The shepherd was about to help them when he was surprised to find that one of them should voluntarily abandon the struggle, and went along with the other. Consequently, together the two sheep enjoyed the fresh grass on one side happily, and then the grass on the other.

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1.用約30個單詞概述上面這則寓言的主要內(nèi)容。

2.用約120個單詞就此則寓言談?wù)勀愕南敕�，�?nèi)容包括：

(1)從這則寓言中，你獲得了哪些啟示？

(2)結(jié)合該寓言給你的啟示，談?wù)勀阍谏�活中是如何做的�?/span>

【寫作要求】

1.寫作過程中不能直接引用原文語句；

2.作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3.不必寫標(biāo)題。

Answer 1

【答案】Possible version:

The fable shares with readers a story about two sheep, both of whom choose cooperation rather than competition in order to have access to the fresh grass of different sides.

As a matter of fact, the fable mirrors that different attitudes may bring about different results. As an old saying goes, union means power. A chopstick breaks easily, while a bunch of them does not. Cooperation is therefore the best policy in any case because it can lead to a win-win situation, where both sides can gain benefit by virtue of joint efforts.

In my daily life, I often cooperate with my classmates when playing basketball, taking part in running races or going in for community-service activities. I learn a lot from my classmates and friends by following their advice. Meanwhile, I also do my part to help them in return. It is teamwork that helps us secure numerous victories.

【解析】本文是一篇圖畫類作文。1. 用約30個單詞概括漫畫中的主要內(nèi)容；要囊括人物、事件，范文中使用了許多高級詞匯shares with ，rather than，have access to和both of whom choose cooperation rather than competition in order to……定語從句，以提高文章的檔次。

2. 用約120個單詞，就此則寓言談?wù)勀愕南敕ǎ?/span>

考生在成文時應(yīng)注意：合理發(fā)揮想象力，使文章的表達(dá)自然，豐滿。文章的寫作要點要齊全： (1) 從這則寓言中，你獲得了哪些啟示？ the fable mirrors that…(2)結(jié)合該寓言給你的啟示，談?wù)勀阍谏�活中是如何做的�?/span>In my daily life, I often cooperate with,…注意文章的人稱：以第一人稱為主。時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時。注意使用高級詞匯mirror，bring about，lead to，cooperate with，Meanwhile, in return和句型，以提高文章的檔次；恰當(dāng)使用一些連詞、插入語，使文章表達(dá)自然，流暢。注意次數(shù)：80—120之間。

【范文亮點】①Cooperation is therefore the best policy in any case because it can lead to a win-win situation, where both sides can gain benefit by virtue of joint efforts. 定語從句；②I often cooperate with my classmates when playing basketball, taking part in running races or going in for community-service activities.非謂語動詞結(jié)構(gòu)；③It is teamwork that helps us secure numerous victories.強(qiáng)調(diào)句。