Question

【題目】假如你是李華，在你校學習的美國交換生David和你成為了好朋友，并且在他的幫助下你的英語學習取得了很大的進步。在他結束學習回國之后，請用英語給他寫一封感謝信。內(nèi)容應包括：1.表達思念； 2.感謝幫助； 3.希望保持聯(lián)系。

注意事項：

1.不得透露真實姓名和學校；2.詞數(shù)：100左右；3.開頭和結尾已寫出，不計入詞數(shù)。

Dear David,

How time flies! It’s been a total week since you left our school.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear David,

How time flies! It’s been a total week since you left our school. Thank you so much for your help. How I wish you could stay here a little longer!

On writing this letter, precious memories rush into my mind. I still remember when you first came into our classroom smiling and showed us your wonderful Street Dance, which, as well as your native accent, attracted us all. What leaves me the deepest impression is the way you helped me memorize English words. You always repeated the words for many times before I could learn them all by heart. With your help, I have made much progress in English, which finally ranks the top 10 in my class.

Thank you so much again!

Best wishes.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于提綱作文，內(nèi)容是以李華的身份結束學習回國之后，請用英語給他寫一封感謝信。寫作時注意以下幾點：1.仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清楚試題提供的所有信息，明確要點就是主要內(nèi)容。2.提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構思和想象。要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關系來寫。3.根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一班現(xiàn)在時為主。4.注意書信格式。

【亮點說明】

本文層次分明，結構緊湊，語言連貫，同時使用了多種句式和結構。How I wish you could stay here a little longer!虛擬語氣使用巧妙；I still remember when you first came into our classroom smiling and showed us your wonderful Street Dance句中when引導賓語從句；which, as well as your native accent, attracted us all.此處which引導非限制性定語從句；What leaves me the deepest impression is the way you helped me memorize English words. 句中what引導主語從句；You always repeated the words for many times before I could learn them all by heart.在句中before引導時間狀語從句。