【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有 10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞.

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉.

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分.

A famous film opened across the country last month， which was the biggest hit of the summer. Last Sunday，my family went to see a film. We booked tickets on advance. We were arrived at the cinema fifteen minutes early. We found it was crowd and people were talking about the film excited. I couldn't wait see my favorite star Jack，who plays a clever soldier in the film. It's a fun film combined lots of action and some humor with "feelings" for friend and families. They were all moved by the words at the end of the film. I will keep it in mind what my great country is always behind me.

【答案】1． a改為the

2． on改為in

3． 去掉were

4． crowd改為crowded

5． excited改為excitedly

6． wait后面加to

7． combined改為combining

8．friend 改為friends

9． They改為We

10． what改為that

【解析】

本文是記敘文，講述上個(gè)月在全國(guó)上映了一部著名的電影，這是今年夏天最受歡迎的電影．上周日，我和家人去看了這部電影．我們都被電影結(jié)尾的話所感動(dòng)．

1．考查冠詞。句意：上個(gè)周日，我們?nèi)胰タ催@部電影。前面已經(jīng)提到，所以用定冠詞the表特指。故a改為the。

2．考查固定搭配。句意：我們提前訂了票。in advance提前。故on改為in。

3．考查動(dòng)詞語(yǔ)態(tài)。句意：我們提前十五分鐘到了電影院。arrive為不及物動(dòng)詞，無被動(dòng)。故去掉were。

4．考查形容詞。句意：我們發(fā)現(xiàn)電影院非常擁擠，他們都在興奮地談?wù)撝@部電影。根據(jù)前面的was可知此處用形容詞作表語(yǔ)。crowded擁擠的。故crowd改為crowded。

5．考查副詞。句意：我們發(fā)現(xiàn)電影院非常擁擠，他們都在興奮地談?wù)撝@部電影。修飾動(dòng)詞，所以用副詞。故excited改為excitedly。

6．考查固定搭配。句意：我迫不及待想看到我最喜歡的明星Jack。can't wait to do sth迫不及待地做某事．故wait后面加to。

7．考查動(dòng)名詞。句意：這是一部有趣的電影，把動(dòng)作和幽默與親情和友情結(jié)合在一起。此處為現(xiàn)在分詞作定語(yǔ)，film與combine構(gòu)成主動(dòng)關(guān)系，因此，用現(xiàn)在分詞作定語(yǔ)。故combined改為combining。

8．考查名詞的數(shù)。句意：這是一部有趣的電影，把動(dòng)作和幽默與親情和友情結(jié)合在一起。friend為可數(shù)名詞，所以用復(fù)數(shù)泛指一類。故friend 改為friends。

9．考查人稱代詞。句意：我們都被電影結(jié)束時(shí)的字幕給打動(dòng)了。指我們家人，所以用we作主語(yǔ)。故They改為We。

10．考查連接詞。句意：我將牢記在心：住過是我的堅(jiān)強(qiáng)后盾。it作形式賓語(yǔ)，that從句作真正賓語(yǔ)放在，后面，that不作成分，無含義。故what改為that。

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