Question

書面表達(dá)（滿分25分）
暑假即將來臨。你班同學(xué)討論了假期的計劃，提出了不同的看法。請根據(jù)提示寫一篇有關(guān)討論的英語短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?br />

	優(yōu)點	缺點
待在家中	花費少；方便舒適	不能親身了解外界
外出旅游	增長見識；開闊眼界	花費多；旅途不便；擔(dān)心安全

 

Answer 1

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Possible version:
The summer holiday is coming. Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.
Some are in favor of staying at home. They think it’s both convenient and comfortable. What’s more, they can save money for other purpose. But they will lose chance of getting to know the outside world.
However, others prefer to got out for traveling, because it can increase their knowledge. Besides, traveling can broaden their horizons. But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. Above all, no one can be sure of their safety.
In my opinion, it would be much better to stay at home. I can do what I like, such as reading books, watching TV and helping my parents with the housework.

解析試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，首先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目。暑假即將來臨。你班同學(xué)討論了假期的計劃，提出了不同的看法。請根據(jù)提示寫一篇有關(guān)討論的英語短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶�。需要寫的�?nèi)容已經(jīng)以圖表形式給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可，特別要注意在陳述完別人的觀點后，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
考點：提綱類作文
點評：本文屬于提綱類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題。平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。