Question

【題目】假定你是李華,你所在學(xué)校要舉辦英語戲劇節(jié)(TheEnglishDramaFestival)。你們想邀請(qǐng)外教John參加。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信,要點(diǎn)如下:

1.介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容;

2.邀請(qǐng)他表演節(jié)目;

3.請(qǐng)他提出活動(dòng)建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear John,

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Sincerely yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

The English Drama Festival of our school is to be held next week. Knowing that you are interested in English drama, I am writing to invite you to participate in it.

A variety of activities will be included in the festival, such as singing, crosstalk and so on. You are expected to put on a performance with us. Besides, since it is the first time that we have organized the English Drama Festival, we really hope you can give us some valuable advice .

Looking forward to your coming.

Sincerely Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封信，邀請(qǐng)外教參加英語戲劇節(jié)并向他介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 介紹活動(dòng)內(nèi)容（introduction of the English Drama Festival）

2. 邀請(qǐng)參加并邀請(qǐng)他表演節(jié)目（invitation to the English Drama Festival）

3. 請(qǐng)他提出活動(dòng)建議（asking for suggestions）

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

the English Drama Festival；hold；invite；participate；advice；look forward to；ask for

第三步：連詞成句

1. The English Drama Festival of our school will be hold.

2. I am writing to invite you to participate in it

3. There are plenty of activities in the English Drama Festival.

4. We expect you can give a performance with us.

5. We hope you can give us some valuable suggestions.

6. Look forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改