Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你校的“英語(yǔ)角社團(tuán)”想邀請(qǐng)你校外教Smith參加本周末的活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你給他寫封郵件。內(nèi)容包括：

1. 邀請(qǐng)參加；

2. 主題：京�。�Peking Opera）；

活動(dòng)形式：自由交流；

3. 時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。

注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)

Dear Smith，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Smith，

I am delighted to know you are into Peking Opera. Now I’m writing to invite you to our next English Corner, whose topic is Peking Opera.

As an old and noble art form, Peking Opera is considered our national opera. I think it great fun to learn to sing it. We are to meet on Sunday afternoon in the First Lecture Hall of our school, which is very beautiful. We will have a free talk from 3:00 pm to 5: 00 pm. What’s more, I advise you to go to the Internet to look up some information about Peking Opera in advance so that we can better talk to each other.

Would you like to join us? Please do let me know.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封郵件邀請(qǐng)外教Smith參加本周末“英語(yǔ)角社團(tuán)”的活動(dòng)。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說(shuō)，把支持句作為分說(shuō)，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：1. 邀請(qǐng)參加；

2. 主題：京�。�Peking Opera）；

活動(dòng)形式：自由交流；

3. 時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。

第二步:列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

be delighted to；invite sb. to somewhere；have a free talk；advise sb. to do sth.；look up；in advance

第三步：連詞成句

1. I am delighted to know you are into Peking Opera.

2. Now I’m writing to invite you to our next English Corner,

3. We will have a free talk from 3:00 pm to 5: 00 pm.

4. I advise you to go to the Internet to look up some information about Peking Opera in advance so that we can better talk to each other.

(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。）

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表?yè)Q一種方式表達(dá)：In other words, that is to say,

6.表進(jìn)行舉例說(shuō)明：For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陳述事實(shí)：In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇：either…or…，or

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步：潤(rùn)色修改