【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

As winter vacation are coming soon, my classmates are trying very hardly to get train tickets to go home. But I have made up my minds to spend the vacation far from home for first time in my life. My parents have agreed to visiting me, and I will have a different vacation. When they came here, I will show them around my university and the city just as well. I have decided to buy them some nice gifts. It will be a big surprising for them. My parents have done a lot to me, and I think it is high time that I did anything special to express my thanks.

【答案】

【1】vacation 后面的are→is

【2】hardly→hard

【3】minds→mind

【4】first time前面加the

【5】visiting→visit

【6】came→come

【7】刪去just

【8】surprising→surprise

【9】to→for

【10】anything→something

【解析】

【試題分析】

【1】vacation 后面的are→is 句意：寒假就要來(lái)了。此句主語(yǔ)是winter vacation，故系動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用is。

【2】hardly→hard 句意：我的同學(xué)們正努力買回家的火車票。hardly幾乎不，hard努力。根據(jù)句意，故這里hardly改為hard。

【3】minds→mind 句意：但是我已經(jīng)下定決心第一次在遠(yuǎn)離家的地方過(guò)寒假。made up my mind下定決心。故minds改為mind。

【4】first time前面加the the first time第一次，序數(shù)詞前面要加定冠詞the。

【5】visiting→visit 句意：我父母已經(jīng)答應(yīng)來(lái)看我。agree to do同意做某事。故visiting改為visit。

【6】came→come 句意：當(dāng)我的父母來(lái)時(shí)，我要帶著他們參觀我的學(xué)校以及這個(gè)城市。用when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句可以用現(xiàn)在時(shí)表示將來(lái)。故came改為come。

【7】刪去just as well意為“也”，just意為“僅僅”。句意：當(dāng)我的父母來(lái)時(shí)，我要帶著他們參觀我的學(xué)校以及這個(gè)城市。just屬多余，故刪去just。

【8】surprising→surprise 句意：對(duì)他們來(lái)說(shuō)這會(huì)是一個(gè)大驚喜。這里應(yīng)該用名詞surprise（驚訝，驚喜）。故surprising改為surprise。

【9】to→for 句意：我的父母已經(jīng)為我做了很多。這里用介詞for表示“為了”.故to改為for。

【10】anything→something 句意：我想現(xiàn)在是我做些特別的事來(lái)感謝他們的時(shí)候了。anything表示“任何事”，與語(yǔ)境不符，故anything改為something。

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