分析 本文是一封電子郵件,屬于提綱式作文.考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示,認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系,然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài).根據(jù)所給提綱,列出要點(diǎn),并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力,靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí),采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái).寫作時(shí)注意時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用,主次分明,詳略得當(dāng),語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔.根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展,按順序安排好材料.同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞,適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫.
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
本文是一封電子郵件,格式正確,內(nèi)容齊全,結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理,同時(shí)使用高級(jí)句子.I am really sorry to tell you that I want to change my booking now.賓語(yǔ)從句用在句中;My friend Tom had planned to visit our city this summer vocation.這種帶虛擬語(yǔ)氣的過(guò)去完成時(shí)態(tài)的運(yùn)用,堪稱經(jīng)典;so he couldn't come as planned.省略句恰到好處;I would appreciate it if you could push the booking date back a week at your earliest convenience.it做形式賓語(yǔ),后面的從句是真正的賓語(yǔ).
But I am really sorry to tell you that I want to change my booking now.(高分句型一)
However,I was informed yesterday that he had an important thing to deal with,so he couldn't come as planned.(高分句型二)
I would appreciate it if you could push the booking date back a week at your earliest convenience.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Sir or Madam,
I booked a room in your hotel for my friend Tom yesterday.But I am really sorry to tell you that I want to change my booking now.(高分句型一)
My friend Tom had planned to visit our city this summer vocation.So Room 101 was scheduled for him.However,I was informed yesterday that he had an important thing to deal with,so he couldn't come as planned.(高分句型二)He had to change the booking date for the room.I would appreciate it if you could push the booking date back a week at your earliest convenience.(高分句型三)Thanks again.I hope this will not cause you any trouble.
I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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