Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞;

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

In the village where I grew up, everyone knew an old man, that spent all his time in painting. People that lived in the village used to admiring his works and he often gave his paintings to his friends. Whether he was offered money, he would never take it. He said he painted for a pleasure. He once gave one of his paintings to my father, who actually wasn’t interesting in art. Years later I found at our old house. By that time the old man had died and people had started to recognize his paintings as great work of art, which were worth lots of money. So an art gallery make me an offer of $5,000 for this painting and I nearly sold it, so then I decided not to. It reminds me of my childhood and of the old man who didn’t real want to make money by painting.

Answer 1

【答案】1. that→who 2. admiring→admire 3. Whether→If 4. 去掉a 5. interesting→interested 6. found后加 it 7. work→works 8. make→made 9. so→but 10. real→really

【解析】作者村子里有一位老人擅長(zhǎng)作畫，卻不為人所賞識(shí)。直到老人去世，人們才意識(shí)到他的畫的價(jià)值。作者有幸得到一幅，但是卻沒有賣，因?yàn)檫@幅畫會(huì)讓作者想起他的童年和那位老人。

1. that→who 考查關(guān)系代詞。此處為非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，不能用that，因先行詞是人，故用who。

2. admiring→admire 考查動(dòng)詞。此處為固定搭配：used to do“過去常常做……”。

3. Whether→If 考查引導(dǎo)詞。句意：如果他被提供錢，他從不接受。此處應(yīng)用if引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，用whether句意不同，故改為if。

4. 去掉a 考查冠詞。此處pleasure為不可數(shù)名詞，for pleasure“為了樂趣”。故去掉a。

5. interesting→interested 考查形容詞。此處修飾人，故用interested。

6. found后加 it 考查代詞。句意：我在老房子里找到了它。find是及物動(dòng)詞，后面要有賓語(yǔ)，代指前面提到的一幅畫，用it。

7. work→works 考查名詞。此處works意為“作品，著作”，故用復(fù)數(shù)。

8. make→made 考查時(shí)態(tài)。此處應(yīng)用過去時(shí)態(tài)，故用made。

9. so→but 考查連接詞。前面說老人的畫很值錢，一家畫廊出很多錢購(gòu)買，但這句說他最終沒有賣，是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故用but。

10. real→really 考查副詞。副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故改為really。