Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

CLEAN UP YOUR BUTTS AND BAGS

All sorts of items become litter, but two of the most common and most dangerous are cigarette butts and plastic bags. Litter is a big problem for our environment, but it is a problem that individuals can easily do something about. Not littering at all or cleaning up litter, such as cigarette butts and plastic bags, greatly improves the quality of our environment.

Although cigarette butts are small, they are bad for the environment. Over 1,600 billion cigarettes are smoked each year in China and large quantities of the butts are thrown away. Worldwide, about 4.5 trillion butts are littered every year. Apart from the fact that butts spoil the beauty of the environment, they contain some very toxic chemicals. These find their way into the water supply where they decrease the quality of the water and endanger plants and animals that live there. Because there are so many butts and because they can take up to 5 years to break down, the toxic chemicals add up to a large amount. So, if people have to smoke, they should not throw away the butts but put them in the rubbish bin instead.

Plastic bags are another common form of litter that is a danger to the environment. There are several reasons for this. They are made from oil and gas, which are non-renewable resources, if they are not recycled, these resources are lost to us. In China, 2 billion plastic bags are used every day. An enormous number of these become litter. This is a huge problem because they last from 20 to 1,000 years in the environment. They float easily in air and water and travel long distances. They find their way to rivers, parks, beaches and oceans. Plastic bags kill up to one million seabirds, 100,000 sea mammals and countless fish each year worldwide. When the animal dies and breaks down, the plastic bag can become free again to kill another animal. It is up to people not to let plastic bags become litter. It would be better if they used fewer and recycled them.

Cleaning up your cigarette butts and plastic bags would improve the environment. The earth would be a better place because it would be less polluted. And we would know that we were doing something to look after our planet. However, I believe the best solution would be not to smoke or use plastic bags at all.

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Answer 1

【答案】Cigarette butts and plastic bags are the most serious litter problems, but people can help deal with them. Cigarette butts, which destroy the beautiful environment and endanger life with poisonous chemicals, should be put into dustbins. Plastic bags, made from non-renewable resources, can exist in different places for a long time, killing countless animals. So people had better use fewer and recycle them. Cleaning up butts and bags will make the world better.

【解析】

本篇書面表達是概要寫作，要求概括煙頭和塑料袋對環(huán)境的危害，并呼吁清理煙頭或者不吸煙，不使用塑料袋。注意篇幅控制在60詞左右。

1、寫之前，需要認真仔細地讀幾遍原文材料，掌握文章主旨。本文主要說明了香煙和塑料袋對環(huán)境有害并分別解釋了原因，最后呼吁為了改善環(huán)境，我們應(yīng)該清理煙頭或者不吸煙，不使用塑料袋。
2、遵循原文的邏輯順序，弄清結(jié)構(gòu)，對重要部分的主題、標題、細節(jié)進行概括，全面清晰地表明原文信息。
3、注意要點之間的銜接，要使用適當?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞語貫通全文。切忌只寫一些簡單的互不相干的句子。
4、不排斥用原文的某些詞句，但不要照搬原文的句子，如果不能完全用自己的話表述，至少對原文句子做一些同義詞替換或者結(jié)構(gòu)上的轉(zhuǎn)換。