Question

【題目】假如你是紅星中學(xué)高一（1）班學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Mike給你郵件說(shuō)他將在今年暑假去Amsterdam旅游。請(qǐng)你給他回一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1.建議他租用自行車游覽該市；

2.說(shuō)明該市為何被稱為“自行車之城”；

3.介紹公共自行車給該市帶來(lái)的益處。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)不少于60；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫；

3. 開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Mike，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mike，

Glad to hear that you are going to visit Amsterdam. I just have learned a lot about Amsterdam in my English class. To fully enjoy this beautiful city, I think you can rent a public bike there.

Amsterdam is said to be the “City of Bikes” because of the convenience for bicycles. It is flat and therefore results in a really good city for bike riding. There are also plenty of places for bicycle parking and most streets in the city centre have a bicycle path. The “white bike” for public use has been popular for many years. Now the city has benefited a lot from the bikes. Both locals and tourists have been using the white bikes, so there is already less traffic in central Amsterdam. And people have been enjoying city centre streets without cars for many years.

I’m sure you will enjoy your trip on the bike. Have fun and do not forget to share your photos!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】本文為提綱類作文，按照出題者的要求針對(duì)Mike暑假去Amsterdam旅游這一情況回復(fù)郵件，給出一些建議。首先考生要簡(jiǎn)單描述得知Mike暑假去Amsterdam旅游這一情況：Glad to hear that you are going to visit Amsterdam. 然后直接切入正題，也就是給出一些建議。文章的主要部分要將Amsterdam和“City of Bikes”緊密聯(lián)系起來(lái)�？忌�可以先描述“City of Bikes”這一稱號(hào)的由來(lái)，例如Amsterdam is said to be the “City of Bikes” because of the convenience for bicycles. 然后分部分詳細(xì)解釋。在介紹Amsterdam和bike之間的關(guān)系同時(shí)，就可以順其自然地提到自行車給這個(gè)城市帶來(lái)的好處，例如：Both locals and tourists have been using the white bikes, so there is already less traffic in central Amsterdam，并不需要另起一段單獨(dú)強(qiáng)調(diào)。