Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三（1）班學(xué)生李歡， 請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文日記，記錄你班同學(xué)上周六參觀中國(guó)科學(xué)院的全過(guò)程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60. 提示詞：中國(guó)科學(xué)院 Chinese Academy of Sciences

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Answer 1

【答案】 Last Saturday, my classmates and I went to the Chinese Academy of Sciences, which was a precious chance/golden opportunity to get close to science.

The moment we arrived at the Chinese Academy of Sciences, we were warmly greeted by a friendly expert standing at the entrance. Excited and happy, we clapped our hands and everyone was eager to explore the amazing scientific world. To have a better understanding of daily basic science, we attended a professional lecture themed Life and Water. A professor introduced the topic in such great detail that we all gave full attention and took a lot of notes.

The highlight of the visit was the hands-on experience in the science lab. Under the guidance of the expert, we got involved in a medical experiment with great care and enthusiasm. Observing the samples through the microscope, we, for the first time, got to know how anti-cancer drugs were developed and what awesome achievements our hardworking scientists had made. We also felt proud of the medical progress of our country.

Before we left, we invited the expert to take a group photo with us as a reminder of the fantastic visit, everyone wearing a big smile. Through the meaningful activity, we all agree that science plays an important role in our life and we will study hard to take advantage of it to make our world a better place.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇圖畫作文。假定你是李歡，根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文日記，記錄你班同學(xué)上周六參觀中國(guó)科學(xué)院的全過(guò)程。

這是一篇圖畫作文，我們需要用恰當(dāng)?shù)挠⒄Z(yǔ)將圖畫所反映的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)。動(dòng)筆前，要認(rèn)真分析圖畫，將四幅圖的內(nèi)容有機(jī)地連接起來(lái)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，主要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。上下文要意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

分析圖畫可知，第一幅圖：我們一到中科院，就受到站在入口處的一位友好專家的熱烈歡迎。我們興奮地鼓掌。第二幅圖：我們參加了以“生活與水”為主題的專業(yè)講座。一位教授非常詳細(xì)地介紹這個(gè)話題，我們都全神貫注地做筆記。第三幅圖：在科學(xué)實(shí)驗(yàn)室，我們通過(guò)顯微鏡觀察樣本，了解到抗癌藥物是如何開(kāi)發(fā)的。第四幅圖：我們邀請(qǐng)了專家與我們合影留念，大家都面帶笑容。通過(guò)這次有意義的活動(dòng)，我們認(rèn)識(shí)到科學(xué)在我們的生活中起著重要的作用。我們要努力學(xué)習(xí)，利用好科學(xué)，使我們的世界更美好。

根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)我們可以初步確定文章可能使用到的詞匯和短語(yǔ)有：precious; golden opportunity; get close to; be greeted by; at the entrance; clap hands; be eager to do; scientific world; have a better understanding of; attend a professional lecture; in detail; take note; highlight; the hands-on experience; under the guidance of ; get involved in; medical experiment; enthusiasm; through the microscope; anti-cancer drugs; make awesome achievements; feel proud of; take photo with sb.; as a reminder of ; wear a smile; play an important role in; take advantage of。

可以使用的銜接詞：1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second… And then,Finally,In the end,At last,Above all等；2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,In addition,as well as,not only…but (also)等。通過(guò)詞匯鋪墊，我們就很容易地行文了，文章寫完之后要檢查文中是否存在拼寫或語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。