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17．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改． 1．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（Λ），并在其下面寫出該加的詞． 刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉． 修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
 Dear Tom，
      How are you？I am just writing to tell you I had wonderful time at your place in New Year．I arrived home，safely and sound．I have something to ask for you．I have been looking through my bags for my favorite red shirt，or I can't find it anywhere．I'm surely must have left it at your place．Could you look around your house for it？
      By the way，I am planning Mom and Dad's wedding anniversary celebration．I had already invited you and your parent．I wonder whether you would like to come to Chicago this time．How do you think of it？Take care of you and write to me soon．Giving my regards to Uncle Bernard and Aunt Norah．
                                                                      Love，
                                                                      Diana．

Answer 1

分析 這是一封寫給好朋友Tom的書信．我在你那玩得很開(kāi)心，現(xiàn)在已經(jīng)平安到家．我在書包找不到我喜歡的紅襯衫，肯定是丟在你那了．我還為我的父母準(zhǔn)備了結(jié)婚周年紀(jì)念，邀請(qǐng)你和你的父母參加，等你的回復(fù)．

解答 Dear Tom，
      How are you？I am just writing to tell you I had∧wonderful time at your place in New Year．I arrived home，safely and sound．I have something to ask for you．I have been looking through my bags for my favorite red shirt，or I can't find it anywhere．I'm surely I Imust have left it at your place．Could you look around your house for it？
      By the way，I am planning Mom and Dad's wedding anniversary celebration．I had already invited you and your parent．I wonder whether you would like to come to Chicago this time．How do you think of it？Take care of you and write to me soon．Giving my regards to Uncle Bernard and Aunt Norah．
詳解：
1．加a；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．have a wonderful time玩得很開(kāi)心．
2．safely改為safe；短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．safe and sound平安無(wú)事．
3．for去掉；動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)搭配錯(cuò)誤．a(chǎn)sk for需要；句意表達(dá)的是詢問(wèn)，不需要加介詞．
4．or改為but；連詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是轉(zhuǎn)折，不是選擇．
5．surely改為sure；副詞錯(cuò)誤．be sure確信，有把握．
6．had改為have；時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的已經(jīng)完成的動(dòng)作，要用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)態(tài)．
7．parent改為parents；名詞錯(cuò)誤．父母是兩個(gè)人，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
8．How改為What；特殊疑問(wèn)詞錯(cuò)誤．what do you think of sth？認(rèn)為某事怎么樣．
9．you改為yourself；代詞錯(cuò)誤．take care of oneself照顧自己．
10．Giving改為Give；動(dòng)詞錯(cuò)誤．句意表達(dá)的是請(qǐng)求，是祈使句，要用動(dòng)詞原形來(lái)構(gòu)成．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．