【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Last semester, my roommates and I shoot a film to observe the 70th anniversary of our motherland. The film was made of solo performances. I was one of the solo singer, and I had practiced very hard for it. Two girls designed the dance to enrich the film. Beside, our English teacher joined us, provided us with lots of help. The film’s success was true a team effort. Everyone taking part in learned a great deal from it and determined to work harder. Our country’s rapid development makes it possible of us to grow up with good living conditions. We will shoulder the responsibilities of contributing to your country.

【答案】1.shoot→shot；2.made后面加上up；3.singer→singers；4.the→a；5.Beside→Besides；6.provided→providing；7.true→truly；8.去掉in；9.of→for；10.your→our

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章講述了上學(xué)期，作者和室友拍了一部電影來(lái)紀(jì)念祖國(guó)成立70周年。這部電影凝聚了多人的精力，使每個(gè)人都受益匪淺。我們要承擔(dān)起為祖國(guó)的發(fā)展做貢獻(xiàn)的責(zé)任。

1.考查時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)句中的Last semester(上個(gè)學(xué)期)，可知此句應(yīng)使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，故將shoot改為shot。

2.考查固定短語(yǔ)。be made of 是指“由……（材料）做的”；be made up of 是指“由……構(gòu)成，組成的”。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境，此處表示的是：這部電影是由個(gè)人表演組成的。因此應(yīng)使用be made up of。故在made后面加上up。

3.考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)�！�one of +可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)”表示“眾多的……之一”，因此此句中的singer應(yīng)使用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將singer改為singers。

4.考查冠詞。此處泛指“設(shè)計(jì)了一支舞蹈”，dance首字母的發(fā)音為輔音音素，應(yīng)使用不定冠詞a，故將the改為a。

5.考查副詞。此處Besides位于句首，besides作副詞時(shí)意為“此外，再說(shuō)”，符合語(yǔ)境，故將Beside改為Besides。

6.考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處為非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，provide與其邏輯主語(yǔ)our English teacher之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，應(yīng)使用現(xiàn)在分詞形式，故將provided改為providing。

7.考查副詞。此句中true用于修飾整個(gè)句子，應(yīng)使用其副詞形式truly，故將true改為truly。

8.考查固定短語(yǔ)。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知是and并列謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)，and前的句子中Everyone作主語(yǔ)，learned作謂語(yǔ)�！�take part in +n.”意為“加入某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)”，但是在這句話中take part 只表示動(dòng)作,并沒(méi)有具體的對(duì)象，在句中作定語(yǔ)，所以應(yīng)省略in，故將in去掉。

9.考查固定搭配。“make it possible for sb. to do”是固定搭配，意為“使得某人做某事成為可能”，故將of改為for。

10.考查代詞。句中的主語(yǔ)是We(我們)，分析句意可知此處表達(dá)“我們要承擔(dān)起為祖國(guó)的發(fā)展做貢獻(xiàn)的責(zé)任”，“我們的祖國(guó)”符合上下文語(yǔ)境，故將your改為our。

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