Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你們班上周組織了一次以“感受工匠精神”為主題的社會實(shí)踐活動。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文日記，記述你們在北京木制文化傳承園活動的全過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：北京木制文化傳承園Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden 工匠craftsman

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Answer 1

【答案】Last week was memorable because our class organized an activity called “Feel the Spirit of Craftsmen”.

Early in the morning, the school bus took us to the Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden. On arrival, the guide showed us around the exhibition hall, giving a specific introduction about Beijing wood culture, which drew our attention and aroused everyone’s interest. After that, with the help of an expert, we couldn’t wait to try ourselves. We worked together to make a chair. Besides, we experienced the best way to carve Chinese characters on a piece of wood. It was such a wonderful and meaningful day that we benefited lot.

On the way back, we shared our art works and feelings in our WeChat group. I hope our class can organize more activities like this.

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇英文日記，記述班級同學(xué)在北京木制文化傳承園活動的全過程。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

人稱：第一人稱和第三人稱；

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時；

要點(diǎn)：

1.描述活動的地點(diǎn)，時間，出行的方式等

2.描述活動的過程；

3.簡述感受。

第二步：列提綱 （重點(diǎn)詞組）

Feel the Spirit of Craftsmen；Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden；craftsman；exhibition hall；draw one’s attention；arouse one’s interest；with the help of；couldn’t wait to；work together；Chinese characters；a piece of wood；benefit；on the way；art works等

第三步：連詞成句

1. Last week was memorable because our class organized an activity called “Feel the Spirit of Craftsmen”.

2. The school bus took us to the Beijing Wood Culture Inheritance Garden.

3. On arrival, the guide showed us around the exhibition hall, giving a specific introduction about Beijing wood culture, which drew our attention and aroused everyone’s interest.

4. With the help of an expert, we couldn’t wait to try ourselves.

5. We experienced the best way to carve Chinese characters on a piece of wood.

6. It was such a wonderful and meaningful day that we benefited lot.

7. We shared our art works and feelings in our WeChat group.

8. I hope our class can organize more activities like this.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：Early in the morning；After；

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：and；Besides；

3.表因果關(guān)系：because；

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改