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6．假定你是李華．你們學(xué)校和一所美國中學(xué)簽署了教師交流協(xié)議．在過去的一年里，你們的英文老師是來自這所中學(xué)的Sue Wood．不久前她返回美國任教．請你根據(jù) 寫作要點和 要求給Sue寫封電子郵件．
寫作要點：
1．對她表達感謝之意；
2．介紹她離開后你自己及班里發(fā)生的事情；
3．希望了解她的近況．
要求：
1．短文須寫在答題卡的指定區(qū)域．
2．短文詞數(shù)不少于100（不含已寫好的部分）．
3．內(nèi)容充實，結(jié)構(gòu)完整，語意連貫．
4．書寫須清晰、工整．
5．郵件中不能體現(xiàn)本人真實信息．
       Dear Sure，
       I'm Li Hua，one of your students in China．It's almost a month since you left us．We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us．
We are busy as usual．We had an English speech contest the other day．I won the first prize!This again reminds me of all your kind help．Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school？Yesterday，we went there and watered them．The tree you planted yourself is growing well，and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood．Will you come back to see Sue Wood？
How is everything with you lately？We hope to know more about and your American students．Hope to keep in closetouch．
All the best
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文為應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)寫作要點和要求給Sue寫一封電子郵件．屬于提綱作文．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時．人稱以第一和三人稱為主．重要短語：miss sb（想念某人），be grateful for（感激），as usual（正如通常情況），win the first prize （贏得第一名），remind sb of sth （提醒某人某事），keep in close touch （保持聯(lián)系）．

解答 Dear Sue，
    I'm Li Hua，one of your students in China． It's almost a month since you left us．We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us．【高分句型】（表達感謝之意）
    We are busy as usual．We had an English speech contest the other day．I won the first prize!This again reminds me of all your kind help．Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school？【高分句型】Yesterday，we went there and watered them．The tree you planted yourself is growing well，and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood．Will you come back to see Sue Wood？（介紹自己及班里發(fā)生的事情）
     How is everything with you lately？We hope to know more about and your American students．Hope to keep in close touch．（希望了解她的近況）                                                                         
     All the best
                                                                                                         Li Hua

點評 寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，并充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當．語言力求準確、簡潔．應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等．