【題目】假定你是李華,準備參加某國際中學生文化探索夏令營。請你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿,介紹一項你最喜歡的中華傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)形式,如中國書法(calligraphy),國畫、京劇等。

內(nèi)容包括:

1.自我介紹;

2.簡介該藝術(shù);

3.歡迎大家體驗。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。

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【答案】Hello, everyone!

I'm Li Hua, a senior high school student from Beijing, China. Today I'm glad to introduce my favorite traditional Chinese art, Chinese calligraphy, to you.

Chinese calligraphy, the art of beautiful handwriting, has developed over many centuries and has been widely practiced in China. Not only does it show the beauty of Chinese characters, but also serves the purpose of expressing the writer's inner world.

I have been practicing Chinese calligraphy since I was a child and I have benefited a lot from it. Would you like to experience this Chinese art form? If you wish, I'd be happy to offer my help.

Thank you!

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生寫一篇發(fā)言稿,介紹一項自己最喜歡的中華傳統(tǒng)藝術(shù)形式,如中國書法(calligraphy),國畫、京劇等。

第一步:審題

體裁:應用文

時態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時

結(jié)構(gòu):總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說,把支持句作為分說,并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求:1. 自我介紹;

2. 簡介該藝術(shù);

3. 歡迎大家體驗。

第二步:列提綱 (重點詞組)

introduce sth to sb.;Chinese characters;inner worldbenefit from;offer sth.

第三步:連詞成句

1. Today I'm glad to introduce my favorite traditional Chinese art, Chinese calligraphy, to you.

2. Not only does it show the beauty of Chinese characters, but also serves the purpose of expressing the writer's inner world.

3. I have benefited a lot from it.

4. If you wish, I'd be happy to offer my help.

(根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。)

第四步:連句成篇(銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last, Last but not least

2.表并列補充關(guān)系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition, As well as, not only…but (also), including, also

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause (從句), In spite of + n/doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

5表換一種方式表達:In other words, that is to say,

6.表進行舉例說明:For example; For instance; such as + n/doing

7.表陳述事實:In fact, frankly speaking

8.表選擇:either…or…,or

連句成文,注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

第五步:潤色修改

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