Question

【題目】在日常生活中，人們對于體育鍛煉所持的觀點各不同，請你以 “ Health means wealth”為題寫一篇短文，號召人們堅持健康積極的生活方式：每天鍛煉一小時，健康工作五十年，幸福生活一輩子。

要點如下：

1. 大多數人認為健康就是一切。

2. 一些年輕人在閑暇時打牌、上網等，認為他們還很健康沒必要鍛煉。

3. 一些人只顧工作賺錢，認為錢就是一切。

4. 你的觀點：……

注意：詞數 100左右；開頭已給出

提示詞： wealth 財富

2.不能逐句翻譯。為使行文流暢，可適當增減細節(jié)

Health means wealth

In our daily life, people hold different opinions about taking exercises.

Answer 1

【答案】

Health means wealth

In our daily life, people hold different opinions about taking exercises. Most of the people hold the belief that if they are healthy, they will have everything．Some of the young spend their holidays playing cards on online games, believing that they are healthy and there is no need for them to do sports．Some of them even continue to make more money, which means everything to them．

As far as I am concerned, I don’t think what some of the young people do in their spare time is right．Games and money cannot bring us real happiness and wealth．Health is the most important thing for us and it can help us to do something that we want to do．We should all remember: exercise one hour a day, healthy work in fifty years, a happy life for life．

【解析】

試題分析：在日常生活中，人們對于體育鍛煉所持的觀點各不同，請你以 “ Health means wealth”為題寫一篇短文，號召人們堅持健康積極的生活方式：每天鍛煉一小時，健康工作五十年，幸福生活一輩子。要點如下：1. 大多數人認為健康就是一切。2. 一些年輕人在閑暇時打牌、上網等，認為他們還很健康沒必要鍛煉。3. 一些人只顧工作賺錢，認為錢就是一切。4. 你的觀點：……寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。注意：詞數 100左右；開頭已給出 提示詞： wealth 財富2.不能逐句翻譯。為使行文流暢，可適當增減細節(jié)。

【亮點說明】本文內容齊全，結構嚴謹，層次分明，布局合理，語言精練，同時運用高級句子�，F在分詞做伴隨狀語：Some of the young spend their holidays playing cards on online games, believing that they are healthy and there is no need for them to do sports．非限制性定語從句的使用Some of them even continue to make more money, which means everything to them．主語從句的使用I don’t think what some of the young people do in their spare time is right．