Question

據(jù)報(bào)道，在4月20日四川廬山地震中一個(gè)名叫高詩(shī)琴的女孩身受重傷后，處于極度的痛苦之中。國(guó)際紅十字會(huì)(IRC)決定，每當(dāng)她收到一封慰問(wèn)信，就給她增加2美分的治療款。假如你是她的加拿大筆友Peter，為了幫助她，請(qǐng)你用英文給她寫(xiě)一封慰問(wèn)信，主要內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括
?自我簡(jiǎn)介
?得知的情況
?表示鼓勵(lì)
?打算為她做什么
?祝她早日康復(fù)
注意：
1.信的格式已為你寫(xiě)好。
2.信中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實(shí)情況。
3.詞數(shù)100左右。
4.請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。
5.參考詞匯：bitter(痛苦)  overcome（克服） recover（康復(fù)）
Dear Gao Shiqin,
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Yours sincerely,
Peter

Answer 1

Dear Gao Shiqin,
I am Peter, your pen friend from Canada. I am very sorry to have heard of your present situation that you are so bitter after you got seriously injured in the earthquake. At present, IRC has decided that it will give you two cents when you receive a letter. That will offer you so much courage. I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is. You are sure to make it. I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you. I do believe that you are brave enough to live on.
May you recover soon.

解析試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書(shū)信的寫(xiě)作。同時(shí)也屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，審題時(shí)注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，描述要點(diǎn)時(shí)要全面不要有遺漏，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用省略句，倒裝句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句型準(zhǔn)確表述。亮點(diǎn)有I hope you will make efforts to overcome all kinds of difficulty, no matter how hard it is.這句話里面有讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，還有I will try my best to ask all my friends, schoolmates and relatives to write letters to you, which may help you.這句話用了非限制性定語(yǔ)從句。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類(lèi)短文寫(xiě)作。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：提綱類(lèi)短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。