Question

【題目】假設你是王林，寒假期間你要到倫敦旅游，請你根據(jù)以下提示給你的英國好友Alex寫一封信，請他推薦一個旅館，要點如下：

1 介紹你倫敦之行的目的；

2 停留時間：5個晚上，從2月8日到12日；

3 房間要求：預定一個房間，旅館要靠近公共汽車站；有獨立浴室；可以上網(wǎng)；

注意：詞數(shù)100左右；可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Alex,

How is everything going recently?

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Yours sincerely;

Wang Lin

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Alex,

How is everything going recently? I am writing to you in the hope that you can recommend a hotel to me.

To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons, I will visit London during the winter holiday. When I am staying there, I want a single room with a private bathroom for five nights, from Feb 8 to Feb 12. I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station so that I can take a bus conveniently. In addition, to keep in touch with my family and friends, I hope I can gain access to the internet in the room.

I would appreciate it if you could help me. I am looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,sincerely

Wang Lin

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，文章的要點基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。在表達要點時，要注意條理清楚，層次分明。在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉要求的時候要使用合適的連接詞，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。

【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些高級詞匯：recommend sth to sb給某人推薦......，keep in touch with聯(lián)系，gain access to the internet上網(wǎng)。運用了固定句型：I would appreciate it if...如果......我將感激不盡；I am looking forward to your early reply.期待您早日回復。范文中的句式多變，運用了不同的語法知識：To experience different cultures and broaden my horizons運用了動詞不定式作目的狀語；so that I can take a bus conveniently用了so that引導目的狀語從句；I hope that the hotel you recommend to me should be located near the bus station這句話在賓語從句里又套用了定語從句。范文中還用了連接副詞in addition“另外；并且”，使文章更加通順。